High School Vacation

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Colt:

"You can't say those words until a few dates." He smiled. "That way you know it." He stroked her jaw then pointed to the food. "Eat." He smiled and ate of his pizza smiling.

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Aurora:

I blushed. "I'm...I'm not hungry..." I stuttered. Now he was going to think me a hypocrit, but I couldnzt eat! My stomach was tied in knots. I sighed and gave up all attempts, just looking at him. A waitress came over and winked at Colt. I glared at her.

"Anything I can get you handsome?"




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Colt:

Colt looked at the waitress. "Our check." He replied looking back at Aurora and not focusing his attention on the waitress anymore then he had to. "We'll get out of here."


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Aurora:

I smiled. The waitress brought the check, Colt payed, and we left. "She was pretty." I commented, looking at my feet. then I remebered I was still wearing his shirt. I had a bathing suit under it. I blushed more, wishing I had chosen to worn real clothes.




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Colt:

"Nope." He laughed. "Come on, let's go swimming."


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Aurora:

I smiled. "Okay. You didn't even notice her at all?" I asked, grabbing his hand. we walked down the beach and I looked up at him. "You didn't even see that she was beautiful?"




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Colt:

"Nope, she wasn't." he smiled down at her. "It's like comparing dirt to a gem." he smiled kissing her forehead.

and your the gem.

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Aurora:

I sighed in contintment. "Time to go swimming." I gave him his shirt back and went down to the water, smiling at him teasingly. "You coming, handsome?" I asked, wadding further into the cold water. I shivered as the cold water hits my bare stomach. I smiled and wrapped my arms around my body.




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Colt:

Colt laid his shirt down next to his shoes and ran into the water diving in and swimming under her pulling her under with him.

"Course I'm coming." He laughed when he surfaced.
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Aurora:

I laughed and kissed him. "You are wonderful!" I sighed. I noticed other couples on the beach...doing things. I blushed. "Maybe we should leave. It's getting late." I bit my lip. I didn't want to find my brother or be around drunken guys. I grabbed Colt's hand, suddenly scared.




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Colt:

Colt looked down at her. "You ok?" She nodded. "Alright, let's go. This city is supposed to look realyl cool at night." He smiled wrapping his arm around her holding her close.


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Aurora:

I sighed and kissed his cheek. "Thanks. very much." I smiled and pulled him out of the water, trying to avoid all the other couples having fun. I looked down at my feet, blushing.




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Colt:

Colt could tell she didn't like the couples everywhere so he ushered her out as fast as he could blocking her veiw from any of it.

"Come on," He smiled down at her leading her through downtown. There were lights lit up everywhere. He saw a club type thing. "Wanna dance?"
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Aurora:

I blushed. "I can't dance..." I said. "And neither of us are really dressed for it." I said, indicating my bathingsuit and blushing more.




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Colt:

Colt laughed. "Oh, right." He smiled. "My bad. I'll have to teach you to dance later." He led her past the club and looked around.

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