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aestar101
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Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:39 pm
aestar101 says... · Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:39 pm
Now, I will be accepting photography and artwork.
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aestar101
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Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:47 pm
aestar101 says... · Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:47 pm
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Icaruss
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Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:32 pm
Icaruss says... · Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:32 pm
Tangled Up In Blue is a three-part Romantic Story. Can you pleaaaase crit that?
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aestar101
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Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:14 pm
aestar101 says... · Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:14 pm
It's rated R, but I critque it anyway.
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Sapphire
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Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:58 pm
Sapphire says... · Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:58 pm
Hi, I had a poem that I'd had a bit of trouble on. I'd love some more thoughts on it, if you have time:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30742.html

Thank you! :)
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aestar101
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Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:42 pm
aestar101 says... · Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:42 pm
Sapphire I reviewed your poem. Iccarrus yours it going to take a tad longer since yours is a story. Sorry for any inconveince. :(
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aestar101
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Sat Jun 21, 2008 3:19 pm
aestar101 says... · Sat Jun 21, 2008 3:19 pm
Icaruss, Im finshed reviewing the first intallment. Good job!
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aestar101
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Sat Jun 21, 2008 5:33 pm
aestar101 says... · Sat Jun 21, 2008 5:33 pm
Icaruss I just got finished criting Tangled Up In Blue. Excellent peice!
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aestar101
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Mon Jul 07, 2008 1:25 pm
aestar101 says... · Mon Jul 07, 2008 1:25 pm
I'm baaaccck!
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aestar101
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Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:59 pm
aestar101 says... · Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:59 pm
Back again!!!
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Jamie_rocks
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:08 pm
Jamie_rocks says... · Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:08 pm
Hi, I need help with a supernatural story I'm working on. It's really only the second one that needs reviews, but you'll have to read the first one to know what's going on. Thanks!

Chapter 1: topic33373.html

Chapter 2: topic34363.html

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CK Lynn
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Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:25 pm
CK Lynn says... · Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:25 pm
Hi, i'd love it if you could do this poem
topic31719.html
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aestar101
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Sun Aug 17, 2008 9:22 pm
aestar101 says... · Sun Aug 17, 2008 9:22 pm
CK Lynn, your poem is finshed. Jamie stories take a little longer for me, but I'll get to it.
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romance otaku
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:13 am
romance otaku says... · Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:13 am
could you pls reveiw my chapter two of my book. the link is in my sig, and a link to chapter 1 is on chapter 2

thank you
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Gadi.
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Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:26 pm
Gadi. says... · Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:26 pm
We're thinking about you

I would lurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrve a critique to that poem. :D Thank youu.
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