30 Minutes in heaven

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Caleb:

I pulled her closer to me, leaning into that kiss. I pushed my tongue gently into her mouth. I teased her, moving it all around and lacing her tongue with mine. I ran my hands up and down her back. I moved my mouth to her ears and licked them and nibbled. I sucked on her neck passionately. I shivered with pleasure. "Is that good?"




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Ugg!"Nagame managed to get him up onto his feet as she hung unto his body to keep him up right.She about stumbled when she bumped into some drunk freind.She was busy enuff not to care.

"Darn we all have problems"she said sitlling him down by the pool and siting at the edg of the pool."Howed a closet party become a beer fest?"she said to her self and then she looked back over to the boy."Well I'm not sure what you were in..."she trailed off...
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Sinra---

Sinra could barely manage a response. "Ya." She moaned. It felt amazing, better than anythign she had felt. She pressed her neck to his lips. She sighed as he gently bit it. She pulled his face back up to her's and she pushed into a kiss with more passion then she had ever kissed anyone. She laced her finger through his hair pressing her body to his.
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Caleb:

I pulled away gently. "Do...do you want to go further?" I stumbled over my words. I didn't want to push her, but I want to be able to please her. I looked into her eyes. "Or would...would you..." I blushed. I was so flustered. "Whar do you want to do?"




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Sinra--

SInra looked him in the eye. "You do whatever you want." She smiled, she was nervous, but she didn't care. She felt so alive when he kissed her. So wonderful. "Anything."


*grrr, sorry it is short,*
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Caleb:

I blushed. "O-okay." I moved my hands to the front. I had no idea what I was doing. I carefully cupped her breasts and played with them gently. I kissed her passionately, slipping my tongue into her mouth while my hands gently moved themselves across her delicate skin. It was heaven! Feeling hr react. I was so nervous! I had no idea what I was doing. But I hoped she liked it.




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Sinra---

Sinra couldn't believe the feelings that were running through her as his hands moved over her body. She felt like she was on cloud nine. A moan escaped her lips and she pushed into the kiss playing with his tounge with her own. She didn't know waht she was supposed to do.
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Caleb:

I pulled gently away from her kiss and moved my mouth down to her breasts, loving each in turn. I heard her moan and smiled. she liked it. a lot. I blushed. "You...you sure this is okay?" I asked pulling away. "I..I mean...with you and alle?" I blushed again.




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***Alle???***

Sinra had to brace her arms against the back of the closet to stay standing. "I'm sure." She murmered. "If you dont' want to..." She looked into his eyes, he was so hott. She wrapped ehr arms around his kneck and kissed him.
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Im at guy13's house so I can't catch up right now, just thought Id say im still alive.




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Bella--

I moaned lightly, leaning into Johnathan.

"You're not nice," I said. He raised his eyebrows at me, and I grinned.

Before he had time to react, I moved my mouth to his neck, nibbling lightly.
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*Guys, this is moving way too fast, can someone please bring Gretchen in or I'll have to pull out.*
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*I'll do something*

Robbie looked around, the drug was beginning to effect everyone. People were making out on anything that was soft. Some people even had covers over themselves as they lay with another person.

Why was everyone having fun? His revenge wasn't supposed to be like this, it was supposed to be absolute.

He caught site of girl popping another tablet in the drink, this would kill her. Did he wish that people would die.

Running over he threw the glass from her hands, "Don't mix anything with the drinks."

She stared at him, "It was only an asperin."

*Best I could do*
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*that was me, was it?*

Gretchen-

She sighed and put the drink down. "I don't even know why I'm here," I said. "I'm so bored." I frowned at him. "You don't go to our school do you?"

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Robbie

"I'm a nobody..."

She looked at inquirenly, "Why you say that?"

Turning away he muttered, "You notice how the party get rather sexual out the cupboards, well I'm to blame. I just stopped you taking some ecstasy..."

Her eyes widened, "Wha..."

"Oh, and you may of known me... My whole revenge plan is fucked up. I'm going, call the police if you want."
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