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30 Minutes in heaven

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Caleb:

I suddenly had the urge to please her..but I didn't know what I was supposed to do. I pulled her gently towards me and kissed her more passionately, wondering if I was allowed to stick my tongue in her mouth.




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Sinra---

Sinra didn't know what she was doing anymore, but she had heard people talking. She carefully, slowly pushed her tounge into his mouth hoping it was ok. She couldn't believe how amazing being so close to a guy she barely knew could be. It was awesome.
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He was kissing me so intensly I thought I'd pass out. He tighted his arms around me, pressing us closer.
When he pulled back to look at my face I said, "Okay, I missed you, a lot." I arched my eyebrow as if asking 'is that the right answer?'. He answered me with another kiss.
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Caleb:

I sucked on her tongue and wrapped my arms around her thin waist. I sighed. "Are you an angel?"




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Tyler---

Tyler kissed her slipping his tounge in her mouth. He pulled away smiling. "So, Clari, what do you want to do now?"


*Grr*
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Sinra---

Sinra laughed, "Last I checked I wasn't." She said kissing his neck softly. She kissed his lips again and felt like she was floating on a cloud.


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Kurimi was tired, needed to sleep.
THose pills had an after effect.
Kurimi fell on the ground, unconscious




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Caleb:

I pulled away and moved my lips down to her neck, breathing in her wonderful scent. Chill bumps danced upon her skin, causing me to shiver with pleasure as well. I slowly and gently kissed her neck. I had no idea what I was doing. I started nibling a little and her answering moans told me she liked it. I sighed. "What do you want me to do?" I asked. I didn't know what to do. I was completely lost. But I wanted to continue pleasing her.




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He hadn't moved, someone knew his name. They knew who he was. But that's probably all. The party was really getting stronger. People had been drinking from the beer he took out. It would be easier to sell.

They'd drove him to this, walking around he spiked the drinks.

An eyes for an eye, you ruined my life. I'll ruin all your parties.
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Sinra----

Sinra could feel goosebumps run up her neck every time his breath tingled against it. "I don't care, I've never really done this before." She breathed. She pushed her lips back against his and held their bodies close. She didn't want this to end. IT surprised her that she acctually liked this guy. She wracked her brain trying to figure out if she had any classes with him and could remember him, but she oculdn't think of any which surprised her. She was sure she would've noticed him.
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**DR, I read through your other post with Johnathan. You put him as talking to Gena, but he was talking to Bella at the time. Just letting you know.**

Bella--

I watched Johnathan walk off, inwardly cursing. I had been hopeful that he would have number 13...damn it!

I continued cursing inwardly, wanding through the house, trying to find someone worth wasting my time with. I saw Johnathan hanging out with Genna, and cursed inwardly again. Damn it!!
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"Some one help me get him up off the ground." Nagame groned as she struggled to lift Kirimi*I still don't remember how to spell it And sorry for the spelling misstakes...*off the ground.

*hey what happened while i was gone?!*
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Sam~

"Sam!" Genna called, tapping her on the forehead.

"What?" Sam growled, sitting up.

"Get me a beer," Genna replied. Sam rolled her eyes and stood, snatching a beer off the table and tossing it to Genna, hitting her in the head. Genna let out a light laugh before chugging the drink down. Stupid skank. Thinks she invincable. Sam thought bitterly as Genna began to look a little strange.
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Caleb:

I blushed and kissed her back. I felt like a big jerk. I didn't normally act this way. I had no idea why I was acting like this now. "What do you want me to do?" I asked fervantly.

Johnathon:

I laughed at Bella. swhe was upset. I walked back over to her and wraped my arms around her waist, nibbling on her ear. "Miss me, gorgeous?" I asked, moving my lips down to her neck and bitting it.




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Sinra----

"Tell me your name." She laughed softly looking him in the eyes. "I'm bad with names." She smiled,

"Caleb." He replied,

"I'm Sinra." She kissed him again ending the conversation.
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