alone

it is a good start i suppose.....it does have potentional to be a wonderful poem! keep up the writing....and if you decide to add to the poem, you might want to change the title (just a thought)...its very....dull! used too much!
i dont mean to be a downer, write it up harry! great start!

Its a very good start. You expressed your feelings and curiosities well.

Sweet short poem

Uhmm,,
I think that as you grow as a writer you may want to add more to this and expand.
then u cud post it again?


I understand your hestiance. I was scared at first to post things too. Because of critiques.
Dont be scared.
Most people here are nice.
Ive only ever met one rude person...


Okay anyways happy writing!
Let me know if you want some tips!


A feel Hp fan!

This is not a poem; this is a string of questions that even you don't seem to take seriously. Poetry is wonderful in that it allows you to share your unique interpretation of the world around you; how you see something is different from how another person sees something, and there's nothing right or wrong about any of that.

A series of simple questions doesn't do any of that. I have no idea what you really think about the topic, other than the offhanded, almost shrug, of "it's a mystery". What does being alone really mean to you? Let me know if you have any questions; I'd be happy to help ^_^

So are u guys arn't posting any more?

You have the inspirtation;


NOW GRAB IT!

Write your heart out.


Don't just do 2 lines.


Write a whole freakin novel!





That's my advice.

Oh no.
no no no no no....

For this to be taken seriously, it needs ALOT more! The previous poster gave you some great advice... follow it!