The Hotel Royal

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Dusty----

Dusty nodded and let him led her out of the room after shutting and locking the door. They walked out onto the beach and she sighed. She felt himstiffen and she followed his gaze to where his brother was standing.

***There action****
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**You know, I'm thinking Ryan is the bad guy and Johnathon is good...**

Johnathon:

I growled. "I'm going to kill him!" I swore, glaring.

"Calm down, please." she begged.

I growled as Ryan walked over to me. "Hey gorgeous. Miss me?" he grinned.

"I'm going to kill you!"

"Awh, come on bro, upset that I got to her first before you did?" he smirked.

Ryan:

I was having fun. "You know, Dusty, I had so much fun with you. Maybe we should do it again."




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***Ya, I knew who you were talking about though.***

Dusty---

Dusty frowned, "Try it again I'll kill you." She hissed, "Your brother will have to get in line."

"You know you liked it." He smiled. She growled low in her throat.
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Johnathon:

I growled. "Leave her alone!"

"Awh, bro, you just don't understand. she was moaning the whole time." I grinned. "Weren't you, gorgeous?"




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Dusty----

Dusty felt sick to her stomach. She clenched her fists. She wanted to beat his face in, but she couldn't move. "I hope you burn in hell!" She growled. He just laughed.
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Ryan:
I chuckled. "Come on, I'm free anytime, gorgeous. In fact, I think your even more beautiful with no clothes on." I smirked.

Johnathon:

That was it. that was the last straw! I growled and hit him on his jaw, sending him back.




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Dusty---

Dusty swallowed hard. She couldn't move. She looked at Johnathon. "W-w-we should go." She said grabbing hold of his arm. "Please!"
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Johnathon:

I growled, then nodded. Suddenly, I felt someone punch me. I realed back dazed. A punch landed in my stomach and I groaned. My lip was bleeding. I glared and attacked, taking out ever ounce of anger that he had caused to rear in me.




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Dusty---

Dusty felt herself shoved out of the way and she landed with a thud. She watched as Jonathon threw punches back at his brother. She jumped up and tried to pull the apart but only got his in the stomach. She landed back on the ground with a thud. "STOP IT!" She screamed.
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Johnathon:

I growled. If I stopped, Ryan would destroy me. I kept fighting. I wasnzt going to give up first.

Ryan:

I stopped and grinned. "What's the matter gorgeous? Can't stand your perfect matcch getting hurt?"




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Dusty----

"Yes! And if you don't stop fighting him I'm gonna hurt you!" She hissed. "You throw one more punch and you'll regret it for the rest of your life. Jonathon, let's go!"
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Johnathon:

I growled. "Fine." I nodded curtly to my brother and left.

ryan:

I laughed as they left. I promised myself I would have more fun with the little angel later.




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Dusty---

Dusty looked at Johnathon, his face was stiff with anger. "Johnathon?" She asked softly looking up at him. "Y-you ok?" She was afraid that he was mad at her. She groaned inwardly. She really messed up this time.
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Johnathon:

"I'm fine. I'm sorry. I'm just...so mad at him!" I clenched my fists. She kissed me and I immediately relaxed.




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Dusty---

Dusty felt him relax and she smiled. "Please, can we just forget him?" She asked pulling him away from the beach. She didn't know what else they could do but she wanted away from Ryan.
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