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Things I will crit.

Poetry Any kind, but beware I will eat your soul. I am slightly evil :)

Fiction Romantic Other and Fantasy are what I am best at.

Lyrics Shock I know, someone that does lyrics!

Art/Photography Will do, but don't expect anything great and profound. I have no idea what I am talking about XD



Things I wont crit.

Scripts I am terrible, I wouldn't want a crit from me on a script.

Fiction I am terrible at criting Sci Fi, since I know little of science. Also I prefer to not do Action/Adventure, it's not really my thing. Historical fiction isn't really good either because I often get my facts mixed up.


Things I am best at

I am really good at reviewing for character development and the basic idea behind the piece.

My grammar is terrible, but I can catch some of it :)



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Any takers?
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*takes*

topic29607.html

I wouldn't mind if you looked at that, if that's okay. It's a little oldish now, but I'm conflicted about it. ^^

I thought I'd show your thread some love, Tale. ^^

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Hey OverEasy,

you seem to know something about poetry, so you'd make me really happy if you'd take a look at this:

post366228.html#366228

I think I may need some help. Just drop me a PM if I can return the favor, okay?

Thank you!

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done with both
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Hey Overeasy!
I would love for you to crit on my Chapters One and Two of The Duty:
Chapter One and
Chapter Two

Thanks so much! If you ever need a critique, let me know :-)
Salena




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'Ello
I'd love it if you could critique this story:
www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30187.html
thanks.
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Hey OverEasy,

sorry to bug you again, but I could really use your help with this.

Thank you!

If there's anything you'd like me to look at just tell me.

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