God of Emotions

*Yep..I just wasn't sure why I was suddenly at my locker lol*

Viola-

"Carole, what should we do? The book says we don't have any more lessons today and training is done." She called into the main house.

"Muck out the stalls!" She called back. Great.

"Well it looks like we get the pleasure of doing one of the most glamourous jobs here at Willow Ranch." She teased. Hart followed Viola out to the stalls.

"How does one muck out a stall?" He asked innocently.

"First we put all the horses out in the field, then we..well we muck." It took a good twenty minutes to get all of the horses out, since there were a few who didn't want to move. Then they both took a pitchfork and mucked. After an hour of work they were finished. Viola wiped her brow as she pulled her gloves off.

"I suppose we will be bringing all of the horses back in now?" Hart asked.

"You're catching on." Viola laughed. "We better hurry though, what time do we have to be at dinner?"

"Six thirty."

"It was nice of Naomi to invite me, your whole family seems pretty nice." she decided not to add, 'except for that emo one' because she thought that wouldn't be to nice.

"Yeah, we can all get pretty emmotional, but we all have a common bond."

"Which is..?"

"Being foster kids." Hart pulled off his gloves and threw them on some hay next to Viola's.

"Oh, I'm sorry, I bet that's rough." What was she doing? How could she just bring up things like that about a person she barely knew!?

"It's not that bad." Viola walked out to the field, followed by Hart, and they began to bring in the horses. This part didn't take as long, most of the horses were anxious to get back to the stalls. They were hungry and tired. When all the horses were in they checked the feeding schedule and fed the appointed horses their individual foods. Viola checked the clock hanging above the door, six fifteen.

"We should go." She said. They washed their hands in a sink and headed out of the stalls. They walked to Viola's car.

My only nitpick, is, for one, you had a spelling mistake, and for two:

Dialog is done like this: [[my first example will be your own lines]]

"Well it looks like we get the pleasure of doing one of the most glamorous jobs here at Willow Ranch[[comma]]" [[not capped]]she teased. Hart followed Viola out to the stalls.

'Comma before and after dialog,' I say, 'and you shall follow.'

I hope.
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Other than that, you have me wondering where this is going to go, which means you've got a good hook going.

What was that? Did we ask for a review?

*Yeah dude, your not really supposed to review Storybooks...*

.....Holy shit dude

*It's okay..lol..deep breaths. Wow I mean..I have never had anyone review a storybook lol..well there is a first for everything..anyways..moving on..somebody post the next part!*

**umm its a storybook, you don't review a storybook**

[Sirith]

Sirith was partially relieved when they got to the Mall, because Naomi stopped singing. Not that she sounded bad, she reminded him of the way all careless humans lived their lives. He stepped quickly out of the car, slamming the door a little too hard behind him.

"Calm," Naomi reminded him, and he nodded though the word angered him the more he heard it.

"Let's get this over with," Sirith muttered, and realized it was his most used phrase. He bit his lip, angry at his constant anger. Which made him angrier.

**feel free to drag Sirith to the Mall, lunabuna **

**Yay! I intended to, hehe **

Naomi~

Naomi grabbed Sirith's arm and pulled him through the mall, like she had that day at school. She'd picked up something for everyone and the board for Hart.

"Now comes the fun part," she announced to Sirith, who was sitting on a bench staring off into space. He looked at her as she began talking, "We're gonna get you some new clothes." Naomi dragged Sirith into the nearest shop, which happend to be Hot Topic.

In a flash, Naomi was in the back, randomly grabbing black nail polish and a few bottles of hair dye. She paid for the things and handed Sirith a bag. "There that's yours, you can pick out more clothes if you want, but these are the main things that I got you." Naomi pulled out a pair of black chain pants, a black t-shirt, a red and black jacket, a pair of black rocket dogs, and finally a small bottle of hair dye. "I'm going to give Mr.Rage a make-over this weekend." Naomi smiled before leaving Sirith to his shopping as she went off and did her own, in the same store of course.

*Sorry about the locker thing- just ignore it ^_^ And that was wierd about the review thing- too random*

Aoi-

Leaving her locker Aoi decied to walk home. Enjoying the senery would be nice for her.

It only took about an hour for her to get home- mostly because she stopped and smelled the roses and stuff.

But after all that she did make it home. Quietly she made it into the house. Viola would soon come over after around 4:00ish (Is that ok Rory?)

Aoi rushed into her room- She had bought a couple of plants to put in her room. She placed thme beside the widow. A fern and a daisy. Her favorite plants.

*this thing is moving to fast for me I'm out*

*ah, ah, panic, panic, where the hell has Fly gone??? AGH!*

*I think that Fly might still be at the school... I guess we sort of left you there... Just say your driving home*

[Giovanna]

There was a click and some shuffling. Giovanna rubbed her eyes sleepily. "Hello! Did someone come in?"

There wasn't an answer, but she was sure that she had heard something. Giovanna hopped off the couch and rushed to the hallway where the rooms were. She slowly opened Sirith's room.

"Sirith?" no one was there.

I know I heard something... thought Giovanna, knocking on Aoi's door.

There wasn't any sound so she began to open it. Thud! She looked down and found Aoi laying on the ground, rubbing her head.

"Aoi! Your home! Oh um... sorry,"

**most likely to get a job**
[Sirith]

Sirith watched Naomi go with conflicting feelings, rage and amusement. More rage than amusement but still. Rage because she was acting so human, getting caught up in the pointless rhythm of their pathetic lives. Amusement because she enjoyed it.

He shook his head, wondering if the others were doing the same. His hands clenched again, and he realized the bag was still in hand. He glanced at the clothes, a reminder of pointless human obsession, and walked over to Naomi.

"What did you get?" she asked, preoccupied with a shirt.

Sirith shrugged, "Nothing. Can we go now?"

*Fly's off to get a job in a very happy place *

"I saw you were looking for help?" Fly said to the man, flashing him a dazzling smile.

"Yes, actually, part-time. Would you like to apply?"

"Yeah, I'd love to."

"What's your name?"

"Felicity... Smith," she said, looking at his nametag. "You're Gerry huh?"

"Yes. Well, Felicity, have you any experience?"

"No, not really. But I've always wanted to work in a toy shop. It seems like so much fun!"

"Yes, it is. Well, you're the first applicant we've had in two weeks. When would you be working?"

"After school, preferably."

"You won't get caught up with homework or anything?"

Fly considered it. "Well, I do like homework, but I guess it can wait a couple of hours."

"After school stuff?"

"Well, I would like to be a cheerleader, they seem like fun people, but this seems even more fun."

"Well, then, I'd have to say, welcome aboard!"

"Yay!"

*Oh, I'm sorry, but she is just such a joy to write! Literally!*

Tex looked at his watch. He walked through the mall looking for that pet store.
He was in search of a toy for 77...if it needed a toy for that matter.

But Tex was gratful. It saved him from being diced up by the girl. After it managed to hop on top of her head, it practiclly shutted her down. She woke a few seconds later and took her still red eyed little brother to her car and drove off.

Tex then went into the petstore and looked at the spider section.
He hated spiders.
He looked at the product section and found some food. He imagined 77 and knew he was going to need more dead grasshoppers.

Tex then looked at the toystore next door and saw a glimse of that girl from school...the one that seemingly makes people happy just by being around them.

He just found her crazy AND annoying.