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Colt-

"We're fine, I'll probably have a few bruises, but it's nothing new and I'll live." He looked at Trinity who had laid her head on his shoulder, "Her parents didn't make it, that is why she was crying."

He looked at the girl, she was beautiful, I hope that doesn't mean she is useless. He groaned in his mind. It seemed that these days girls that were very attractive were also very useless. Only time will tell.

Trinity-

"Colt made sure I didn't get hurt." Trinity whispered,

"How so?" The lady, Inez, asked looking at Colt then Trinity again.

"He wrapped me in a big bear hug." Trinity said slowly picking her head up to look at the plane, but Colt kept her head pointed the other way.
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Bella--

I walked along the beach, helping who I could and comforting who couldn't be helped. My arm throbbed in constant pain, but there was nothing that could be done for it. While most were crying over broken bones, I realized that crying wasn't going to make it better.

My backpack has landed, in what looked to be perfect condition, next to a man. His hair was shaggy, blond, and his eyes were closed. He was breathing too hard to be asleep, but looked to peaceful to be moved. His head was bleeding, as was his side.

"Oh shit," I murmured, kneeling next to him. With a head gash like that, he could very well have a concussion. I shook his side gently. "Get up!" I ordered.
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Inez

I looked at the child, she looked fine, so did he. But I couldn't be sure from what I saw. He had a cut on his forearm, not very bit or deep, but it still needed something on it to keep it from infection.

"You have a cut on your arm," I said walking foward and making sure my bag was attached, I looked at it, it was deeper than I thought, he needed stitches. "You need stitches," I pointed out.
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Colt-

Colt looked down at his arm and shrugged, "I'll live, just need to wrap it up." He said, he hadn't noticed the pain until now, but he kept right on ingnoring it. He looked at Trinity who kept her head on his shoulder watching the lady. She was scared, he didn't blame the poor girl.

"We should probably go see who else we can help." He said shifting Trinity's weight a little. She really didn't weigh that much, but standing still was getting uncomfortable.

Trinity-

Trinity didn't want to look at the cut Colt had on his arm, she didn't preferably like blood. "There are lots o people who need help." She said clinging to Colt's neck as he shifted her, she didn't want to be put down. He didn't put her down and she let her hands lossen a little.

"There should be a first aid kit in the plane." Colt said,

"Are you going to stich your arm up?" She asked him, she felt him chuckle.

"Naw, it'll heal fine and dandy. If there is any super glue I'll use that just to hold it together, then wrap it up and whalla." He grinned,

"Are you serious!" She demanded wide eyed.

"Yup, even the docs use Superglue in the hospitals, though they call it something else. So let's go find that first....." He trailed off for a second. "How about you stay here with Ms. Inez, I'll go find that first aid kit." She shook her head furiously.

"I don't want you to leave me." She wailed about to cry again.

"It won't be for long," He turned to the lady. "would you mind watching her, I rather she not go into the plane."
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Inez

I nodded, "if you let me stitch up your arm." He looked at me surprised. "Trust me I know how to do it. I'd show you my degree but that's back in the states."

"Degree?"

"I'm a medic."
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Colt-

Colt looked at her, "We wont have a needle or the thread you would need." He said prying Trinity from his neck. When he went to hand her to Inez she grabbed his neck again. "I wont be gone long, missy, I'm sure Ms. Inez wont hurt you." Trinity didn't let go. "Please." He felt her slowly release his neck and he set her on the ground quickly before she could change her mind.

Trinity--

Trinity looked at Colt and then the lady. He was waiting for her response before he left and she took that opertunity to latch onto his leg. She wouldn't let him out of her site, that was how her parents had died, if she had just been with them. She could feel him trying to pry her off, but this time he wouldn't suceed.
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David-

Pain flared through my body as i felt someone shaking me. My eyes flared open to stare at the girl that knelt at my side.

"Get up!" she said. Her voice had a sharp edge to it, demanding authority.

I tried to move. I really did. I pressed my palms to the ground, dug my heels into the sand, and lifted my head. Then i fell back weakly, feeling new warm blood trickle down my forehead and side.

"Can't..." I whispered wearily, closing my eyes again. I wanted to sleep so badly...

She wouldn't allow it. Her hands shook me again and again.

"Get up! Come on, you have to get up."

I opened my eyes again, regarding her coldly. "Leave me alone. Let me be."
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Inez

I kneeled down next to the girl, "honey, if you're trying to protect him I doubt clinging to his leg will be the best idea."

She shook her head stubbornly. I wasn't good with getting kids to do anything other than medical stuff, I didn't know what to do! "Come on, I need to make sure you're okay."

"I'm fine." she persisted.

"Will you let me double check?" I looked in my bag, I had one lolly pop left in my ziplock bag. "I'll let you have my last lolly pop."
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Trinity-

Trinity chewed on her lip and thought about it. "Can we save it for later? Incase we are here for a while?" Inez nodded, she slowly let go and looked at Colt. "Hurry." She said putting her hands on her hips like she had seen her mom do when she wanted something. Colt smiled,

"Alright, Missy." he turned and walked away and Trinity felt alone.


Colt-

Colt hurried and walked through the plane ignoring the dead bodies. He grabbed the first aid kit and looked around. He saw his carry on bag and he quickly grabbed it. It was a duffle bag that he easily carried though would be heavy for others. He quickly walked back over and handed the kit to Inez.
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Bella--

"No, you can't sleep!" I said, patting his face lightly. He opened his eyes just barely, glaring at me. "You've hit your head -- sleeping is a big no!"
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Inez

the case was plastic sealed, the things inside would still be intact, even the antibiotics. "Now can I stitch you up?" I asked.

He seemed slightly amused and sat down so I could reach him. After a few moments I had him all patched up.
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David-

I looked at her uncomprehendingly for a moment before shrugging slightly. "So? What do you care?"



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Colt-

Colt could barely feel the needle moving through his skin that had long sense gone numb. Trinity burried her face in his chest not wanting to see. At one point she looked near ready to cry when she saw Inez push the needle into his arm. He had just pulled her head away and tried to talk to her. She in turn burried her face in his chest.

When Inez finished her looked at his arm. "Couldn't have done it better myself." He smiled standing up and picking Trinity up, she had fallen asleep against him while Inez was working on his arm. He cradled her small form carefully looking around at the others. "Let me find somewhere to lay her, then we better help the others."



***Ok, so there are a few things about Colt I don't have in his profile, is that going to be a problem. Like he has grant to carry a knife on the plane and such, nothing like a gun, that would be to good. He had one in his luggage that he had just bought, but not in his carry on bag. ****
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Inez

I nodded and helpped him stand, it wasn't easy when your arms were occupied with a 10 year old girl. We sat her down on a renagade seat that had flown off the plane and started walking off to look for others.

"Where were you going?" Colt asked.

"I was going home," then I sighed, "I've spent the last 5 years in Nigeria."

"Why?"

"I wanted to help, there aren't a lot of doctors there."
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Colt-

"That was real nice of you." He smiled as they neared some of the others.

"Where were you going?" She asked,

"TO see my brother, get away from life I guess." He said running a hand through his hair.


Trinity-

Trinity woke up to something hitting her head. She jumped up and looked around. Colt and INez were bent over someone. She felt a rock hit her head again. She spun around saw a monkey throwing the rocks. She ran towards Colt screaming, Colt spun around quickly and caught her,

"What happened?" He demanded, she pointed towards where the monkey was but it was gone.

"It was throwing stuff at me," SHe screached,

"What was?" He asked softer,

"T-the monkey!" She replied clining to his neck.

"I'm sure it wont hurt you, if you want to hold on to me then get on my back I need to help them." He replied. She did watching everything they did over his shoulder.
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