My life in a boarding school

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I Guess you may say that I'm new to this and will be a little broad here.
Your character is joining a boarding school that harbor's student's ranging from 12 to college. No uniforms. and this school is set in modern days
Rules:
1.You will be allowed to have two characters. It can be a teacher but look at all of the character things so you don't get the same subject. Make a subject up if there isn't one that you like.
2. you should not just pull a gun at the school and blow everybody up...no killing of other chatters characters. You can kill your own characters and your own Backdrop students. ( Example of Backdrop students: main character talking to a student not mentioned before and will not be mentioned again unless you want to.)
3. When interacting with other chatter characters, make sure you know that characters personality to forulate a response. If you make the charcter kiss your's without Chatters permisson, You will be expelled shortly.
4. Feel free to use minor langauge, Just no word's like fu*k or bit*h.

character: Principal Gargon
Occupation: Principal of Silence Boarding school
Age: unknown
Appearance: Never reveal's his face to the students but use's the school's intercom to communicate.
Personality: He is shadowy and often the center of rumor's of a forbidden romance, Spy group, or a cold blooded murder. Why he never reveal's his face is never shown, But you can think of a reason ( with my permission of course) Emotionless, caculating, Many new student's think he is a robot.

I will start the story when 6 chatters come!
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character: Audra
Occupation: a student
Age: 16
Appearance: 5'8", 120 lbs, long blonde hair, blue-grey eyes, usually wear punk-style outfits
Personality: Calm, quiet, usually keeps to herself inside the school atmosphere. On the street, she's outgoing, loud, and very mischevious.
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This sounds interesting, and I think I'll join with a profile later on. I wanted to make a point though -- one of your rules, the one about doing major things, kind of kills the fun in a storybook if you ask me. Why couldn't the characters have a school riot or anything? Randomness = best quality in a storybook.

Just some food for thought! Also, welcome to YWS!

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**Ooh! Boarding school me like!! Oh btw Welcome to YWS!!**

Character: Naomi Jade Newell

Occupation: Student & Team leader of 'Rebel Skaterz'

Age: 15

Appearance: 5'10, slender and curvy but very masculine, Blue-Green Eyes, Blondish-Brown hair. Picture: http://naturalbornkillers.deviantart.co ... l-56456669

Skateboard: http://superbleeder.deviantart.com/art/ ... d-48657688

Personality: A huge tomboy/punk/skater, outgoing and loud. Hates preps and usually hangs out with her skater friends.

History: No parents...not that she knows of. Lived with her grandma, who sent her here during her 'rebelious' stage, and hsn't brought her back or seen her since.
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ok this sounds interseting....

Character: Satika Nunez
Occupation: student
Age: 17
Personality: Doesn't talk that much. Mainly talks to the people who are really close to her. People think she's gothic cause she wears alot of black, but she really isn't. black is just her favorite color. she also likes red. she is very intelligent.
Appearance: this is as close as I can get:
http://images.channeladvisor.com/Sell/SSProfiles/30002796/Images/FrancisRed.jpg her eyes are an unnatural emerald.(very very very dark)
History: Her mother abandonded her when she was 9. Never knew her father. She lived on the streets for a few years till some people took her in. They sent her here.
Other: she secretly wishes she were a wolf.......or had a pet wolf

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***Can we have a guy????***
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Oh this looks like fun. I'm going to make two characters

Character: Hannah
Occupation: Student
Age: 13
Appearance: Slim, straight light brown hair, azure blue eyes, wears alot of pink, girly clothes
Personality: Clever, loud, misbehaves in class and is always pranking people. Friends with almost everyone.


Character: Ivy
Occupation: Student
Age: 13
Appearance: Slim, Straight light brown hair, very dark blue eyes, likes wearing pink and black
Personality: Clever, not as loud, misbehaves in class and comes up with the ideas. Also friends with everyone.


Hannah and Ivy are twins but not identical. They came to the school because their parents are working around Europe.
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I Got another Male charcter...is it just me or a lot writer's online are girl's?

Name: Henry Walt's
Occuptation: Student/ prank's our us
Age: 14
Appearance: Messy Black hair, Black Jacket and jeans.
History: Spend most of his life under the thumb of a military wife and a the mouth of a lawyer. He spend 2 years in military school then was sent to Silence hill so he can become a lawyer.
Personality: He often give's the impression of being a slimy snake and only is loyal to the highest bidder. but out of pranking people, he is often seen giving 50% of his money pranking people into the charity box and often goe's to Church and confesses so much that he know's the priest personaly.
Prank our us: Henry's own ' lemonade stand' of pranks. He often sell's pranking items like stink bombs, Bottle rockets, Eggs, and toliet paper. But at a special price he will go out and do a prank on a specific person.
NOTE: IF A PERSON ASK'S FOR ME TO PRANK YOUR CHARCTER, I CAN BUT YOU NEED TO FIGURE OUT WHAT I HAVE IN MIND AND WRITE A WAY TO AVOID IT.




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Name: Colt Ryder
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Age: 17
Appearance: Short black hair, sharp green eyes 6'6, all muscle, a cowboy type boy. Tan as all get out.
History: Parents were druggies, and died, he was sent to a boarding school by his aunt and uncle because he doesn't want to deal with him. He doesn't talk about it much.
Personality: Protective, sweet, loving, But he is TOUGH, he can take all the banter thrown at him but mess with his friends he'll kick some butt. He is a prankster himself but he doesn't do it alot, but he is quiet about it.
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*Colt again??*

Okay, I'll try this. :D I just won't be able to be too busy on here.

Name: The Jax (nickname, nobody calls him by his real name--teacher call him "Jax")
Occupation: Being cool
Age: 13
Appearance: Long-ish brown hair, gray eyes with a bit of blue in them. 5'10". Wears baggy pants and long shirts. Kind of like a punk, except nicer.
History: His parents are rich, orderly people. Even though he really isn't, they thought he was out of control. (Aka, punk teenager.) So they sent him to the boarding school.
Personality: Cool, friendly, usually popular. A little bit nervous about the boarding school, but he doesn't show it. He'll make friends with anyone, no matter how old or how young they are. He tries hard to keep his friends, and is very pacific if he can be, but can fight like heck if he's challenged.

Okay, so that's it... ready to begin?
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All right, I will start the story.

" Welcome all new student's!" The principal shouted over the intercom.
The new student's looked around and saw that it was coming from a small box in the bush's.
" I will be blunt. My name will be given later. But right now I shall welcome you with humble degree By bowing to the michrophone." There was silence.
Some of the student's snickered.
" And to remind all new student's, My door is open...but the door behind that one is locked so that sucks for you...anyway, thank you."
The intercom cut off.
" Oh!" The intercom came back on." And Mr. Walt, please come to the phone room...you left your stink bomb here."




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Colt-

Colt shook his head and looked at Henry, "Your going to be out of buisness soon." He laughed as he kept walking towards his dorm. He had his duffle bag slung over his shoulder. He had the rest of his stuff stacked by the entrance waiting for him to move it by himself. He frowned, just great, this year would be just as boring as any other.
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((Um, before I post, I'm gonna tell you this. Put a space between your paragraphs; it makes it not so hard on the eyes and easier to read.))

Audra

I snickered when the intercom cut off. That Principal...he was something else.

Just like this school.

And they thought they had problem students before...wait until I got wound up!
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Hannah and Ivy-

Hannah and Ivy sat laughing in their first class of the new term. Last year they had become friends with Henry the year before and often heard about his pranks. They loved playing tricks on people too and had become a bit like Henry's minions.

The Teacher wasn't here yet. Everyone was still waking up and yawning in their seats. They had had a party in some of the dorms last night and stayed up until late at night. The intercom crackled into life again.

"Erm I seem to be locked in my...room. Do you have anything to do with this Mr Walt?"
Hannah and Ivy burst out laughing with the rest of the class as the English teacher walked in. He looked stony faced and angry to be back at teaching.
"Bags off the tables," He commanded.

Hannah slammed her school bag down the row knocking everyone's bags off before they got anything out. The teacher snarled at her and turned to write on the whiteboard.
"Have you got any start of term ideas," Hannah whispered to Ivy.
Ivy knotted her eyebrows and looked round in confusion.
"Plans for what? She asked.
Hannah sighed too loudly. The english teacher glared at her and carried on writing. Hannah rolled her eyes.
"Pranks! I want to find out how Principal Gargon got locked in his office as well."

They hissed at Jax who was slouching two rows in front of them. He didn't hear. Ivy ripped a piece of paper from her book, rolled it up and aimed. The paper ball hit Jax in the head. He turned around. Hannah waved her arms then pointed at the english teacher. Jax shoulders sank and he reluctantly stuck his hand in the air.

While the teacher was busy answering Jax question, Hannah grabbed her bag and Ivy's and snuck out the open door. Ivy put up her own hand. The teacher nodded to her.
"Can I go to the toilet sir?" She asked, batting her eyelids and hoping he wouldn't notice that her sister had dissapeared.
He nodded again. Ivy left the room quickly. Hannah grabbed her wrist and ran along the corridor.

As they climbed the stairs they passed Henry heading the other way. He was swinging an old fashioned key round his finger carelessly and whistling. Ivy opened her mouth in suprise. He hadn't let the Principal out. Henry carried on down the corridor to his dorm. The intercom crackled again.
"Mr Walt this isn't funny," came a firm voice.
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