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Gwenevire
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:13 pm
Gwenevire says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:13 pm
Hey,
I know this is random but its in the randomness section and its my job.
I am purple so I will review anything you would like, just post it here or even better PM.
I will do my best to get to it right away and start reviewing, I will do my best to help you with everything :)

post and PM away!

Yours Truly,
Gwenevire
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Aedomir
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:14 pm
Aedomir says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:14 pm
Heya there! I hate asking or reviews...

But in my portfolio there's a really random sotry called 'Milkman'... appreciated review please!
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Aedomir
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:17 pm
Aedomir says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:17 pm
Thanks!
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Gwenevire
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:30 pm
Gwenevire says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 9:30 pm
No probs it will be up in a minute.
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chocoholic
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:30 pm
chocoholic says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:30 pm
Hey,

I'd love some more crit's on How You Break My Heart. There's five chapters so far.

Here are the links:

Chapter 1 topic19607.html

Chapter 2 topic19984.html

Chapter 3 topic20986.html

Chapter 4 topic25267.html

Chapter 5 topic25970.html

Thanks Gwen.
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Eimear
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:32 pm
Eimear says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:32 pm
Hey, i'd also like a crit on my poem in the Dramatic Poetry section -'A hand takes yours'

Only if you can though,

Thanks in advance,

Eimearxx
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Gwenevire
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:37 pm
Gwenevire says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:37 pm
Choco: I will start reviewing your novela tomorrow :)

Eimear: I shall do it right away, just to warn you though... I am not to good with poetry :P
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Wolf
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:39 pm
Wolf says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:39 pm
Alphess - part 1?

You don't have to, seeing as you're buried neck-deep in critiques now, but... *hopeful*
everything i loved
became everything i lost.

Would you like a review?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html
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Gwenevire
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Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:43 pm
Gwenevire says... · Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:43 pm
I have it printed out and I am going to crit it tonight and hopefully post it up tomorrow :wink:
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Aedomir
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Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:17 pm
Aedomir says... · Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:17 pm
Hey! How about #10 of the Immortals? That would be great if you could! Its in my portfolio...

Thanks!
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Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.
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Gwenevire
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Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:21 pm
Gwenevire says... · Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:21 pm
Sure thing :)
Is it a chapter in a novela?
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Aedomir
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Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:23 pm
Aedomir says... · Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:23 pm
well, its the end of chapter four, of a novel I'm writing. It won't make a lot of sense, but opinions are always welcome!
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.
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Gwenevire
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Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:25 pm
Gwenevire says... · Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:25 pm
I shall print out, read and crit all of them :)
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