The Breed

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Drake

My nostrils flared. More Rogues.

"Stay beside me!" I commanded as we began to run. Tonight was not cool. Everything was not going to plan!

Another scream. Another woman's scent. Another Rogue.

"Where are we going?" Alana asked, following me.

I didn't answer and followed the scent. It led me to a closed warehouse door, which I busted through. There, tied to a chair and about to play victim to a thirst Rogue, was a black haired girl.

"Alana, get her out of her, and head for Number Forty Two, Commerce Street. That's the base. I'll deal with him."
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Alana-

"Monanoke!" Alana gasped, she ran towards the girl and quickly cut the rope as Drake tried to deal with the Rouge who didn't want to lose his meal. She pulled Monanoke up and out of the building running towards the Base. As they walked into the buildings she saw another Rouge. She pulled her gun out and looked at Monanoke, "Just run to that room, ok?" Monanoke nodded and they ran towards the room. The Rouge spun around spotting them as they neared.

Alana stopped turned and aimed, she fired once hitting him in the arm. She heard him growl and Monanoke stop.

"Keep going." She hissed. She aimed again and fired, but the gun just clicked.

Oh god Alana grabbed her knife as the Rouge ran at her and wrapped his grummy hands around her neck. She jammed the knife up against his chest slicing deep into the skin. He hissed and started falling his nails jamming into her arm ripping them open. Alana cried out in pain and tore away running towards the base her head swimming.

When she got in she pulled her jacket off and looked at the cuts. They were deep, but hadn't hit a vain. She quickly grabbed a jacket as Monanoke ran over. She yanked it on covering the cuts before they had been seen. She wasn't going to be a bother to anyone.

"YOu ok?" Monanoke asked looking at her. "Your pale!"

"I'm fine, just got scared, I need to sit down." She muttered slowly lowering herself into the seat.
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Monanoke wasn't going to leave Alana. The black haired girl sat down besides her.



(sorry all I got)
Last edited by Maki-Chan on Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:50 pm, edited 2 times in total.




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*WAIT! No one saw the wounds, she covered them up before anyone saw them. :'(. Sorry, I want to work on some of her character this way or I wouldn't mind. **
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*ok pretend I just sat next to you.*




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Alana-

Alana closed her eyes and evened out her breathing. She would be able to hide the pain from her features, her hardest task would be to stay concious.

"Wake me up if Drake doesn't show." She muttered falling asleep.



**Only thing is if a vampire walks over or anything then they will know she is bleeding.*
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Monanoke carefully watched out for anything suspicious, and to wake Alana if Drake showed up. She sighed.

"How did all of this happen?"




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Naomi~

Naomi slammed the dagger deep in Jace's arm and pulled out another. Jace hissed a jumped away into the darkness, her red eyes never leaving Naomi.

Naomi turned and ran towards Forty-Two Commerce Street. She busted into the house and grabbed Alex from Jenna. "Kay. Follow me. Hello Percy." She greeted the other vampire.

"Naomi." Percy replied and sat down. He pointed towards a door in the back, Naomi nodded and walked towards in, Jenna behind her.

She turned the nob and the door opened to a big ally way, blocked off in every direction.

"This way." Naomi instructed and turned left, walking into an unseen tunnel.

"Freaky." Jenny stated.

"Freakier than what you've encountered today?" Naomi challenged in a joking voice.
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Drake

Finishing off the Rogue was easier than I had thought. Before I realized it, I was finished with him and walking towards the Base.

Only to find a new scent.

Blood.

Alana's blood.

I ran forward, and soon found myself kneeling beside her. She was unconscious.

"What happened?" I demanded of Monanoke.
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Man you guys move fast. Too fast for me. I have to drop out as well, but you can use my character.
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*Aww! Tony, c'mon! Gah...
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Monaoke stood up- startled from Drake's quick arrival. She desided to not wake up Alana. She looked to peaceful.

"uh, I think she might be injured. But I'm not sure. I didn't see anything." She informed Drake.

Drake walked over to her- putting his deligate soft skin hand on her forehead and stroking her.

"Should I go get a doctor?" Monanoke asked.




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The tunnel ended in a bright white room. Jenna stared, amazed. There was no bustle, no rush, but the vampires seemed to melt out of the walls.

One of the breedmates, a human, saw Alex and took her immediately off to some antichamber. Jenn to follow, but her way was cut off. She collapsed in a (surprisingly comfy) chair and said to herself

"What happened to my quiet night in of Shakespeare and milky tea?"

She looked up to see several vampires staring at her uncomfortably.

"What?" she said defensively, then realised that not only was Sam's shirt ripped, it was also covered in human blood.

One of them, whom she assumed had less control, licked his lips, but stayed his distance.

"Up on the balcony," Percy told her. "You'll be okay in the open air."

Jenna moved up to the balcony. She realised the the twisting tunnel had taken her far away from Commerce Street. She gazed into the night, searching for the dark figures that haunted her sleep.

So much for keeping away from vampires, she thought bitterly.
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Drake

There was blood on her arm, and as I unwound the jacket from her obvious injury, I had to fight to keep control. Her scent was intoxicating and weakening my control.

And there, on her arm, was a series of cuts, deep and streaming blood. I could catch the scent of a Rogue on her...

"A Rogue..." I hissed. "When did the Rogue tag her?"

For some reason, I was getting angry. I wanted to hurt something, to kill something...

But I couldn't. Alana came first. I had to take care of her first.

I picked Alana up and gestured to the door as Monanoke began to talk.
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"How bad are her wounds?" Monanoke asked.

Drake gave her an angry look. Monanoke knew instantly the answer to her question. Drake motioned towards the door, and Monanoke followed quickly behind him.



*sorry its short*



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