Brainwash Proof

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Trinity-

Trinity slowly lost the group and ended up in the cafateria. She saw someone walking her way and she quickly hid holding her breath. IT was a guy and he was rubbing his head like it hurt, he wasn't one of the scientist. She jumped out in front of him.

"Come on everyone is leaving." She said before turning and running towards where seh heard teh others.




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Lizzy and Rececia were leading everyone to the top floor roof. Lizzy remembered being transported on a helicopter to this place. So most likely there would be more. Also someone in thier group must know how to fly one anyways.




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Can someone bring me in please? I don't want to drop out.
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*I will bring you in!!! Also do you want your person and mine to fall in love?*


Soon they made it too the roof. Lizzy turned to face everyone." Does anyone know how to fly a helicopter?"

Lucan stepped foreward." I do." He said.




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Fine by me. Thankies!!
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**I had, but I'll have my girl be up at the roof on my next post**
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alright but it will take a while to get everyone on the helicopter so you can relax ^_^




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Oh, yeah, that's right! TN had already claimed Lucan! Sorry, Maki...
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Trinity quickly made her way to up the roof. Everyone was up there. She watched as they tried to figure out who would fly. They really needed two people to fly it safely. She stepped forward and looked around. She somewhat knew about helicopters. If they asked for a second person she would say something. She would have to co-pilot though, she didn't know enough to do it all by herself.




**Sorry it is short, ignore my last post**
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It was tough but soon everyone fitted on the helicopter. Lucan and Trinity climbed into the piloting part. Lizzy stared at the stairs leading to the roof- a large amount of guards arrived on the roof. Lizzy turned around and ran towards the helicopter.

"Hurry everyone! We have to leave now!!!" She yelled.

Rececia ran besides Lizzy. As she boarded Lizzy turned to face the guards. Their guns aimed at the patients.

The green haired girl breathed in a large breath. As she exhaled the sparker in her lungs clicked creating a spark and the helium in her lungs mixed created a flame. Its fire burned the guards to ashes.

Lizzy turned around and jumped the helicopter.




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**I can't bring my character in! Ariel (Maybe) and I had it all planned out, but Hollie posted so now I don't know how to bring her in. Can someone help me out please?**
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Is it too late to join in? I don't need to be in the helicopter, I have a character planned out...

Name: Sophia Baxter

Age: 19

History: she lives with her uncle, one of the chief scientists in the labaratory, who is under the impression that her father is dead. Her father however, is working underground, trying to revive those who have been brainwashed.

Personality: Sophia is reckless, brave, headstrong and flies into a temper far too easily. She's smart when it comes to science, but classical music, literature and any form of art are lost on her. For all her being a china doll, she has a mind of machines.

Appearance: To keep her uncle under the impression she's his golden girl, Sophia (Fee to her friends), has platinum blonde hair down to her waist and does her makeup every morning (she's got the whole routine down to thirty seven seconds), she has big blue eyes and she's only 5' tall.

**open to romance**

So if that's okay, I'd love to join in... I'd be starting in my own helicopter...
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**Where are y'all????????**
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*I'm here, waiting for the go-ahead to join in...*
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**Sorry I was talking to Bella, :D**
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