Brainwash Proof

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Lizzy-

SHe slowly opened her eyes. Lizzy was being carried over Lucan's shoulder." Ughhh..." Lizzy moaned.

She felt exhausted." Hey you ok?" Lucan asked.

Lizzy nodded." Yah, I'm just sleepy."

Lucan smiled. In front of them a whole group of 'cops' found them." Shit..." Lucan whispered.

Lizzy opened her mouth and breathed in deeply. SHe made sure her head was past Lucan's body. Then he heard a click noise in Lizzy. Then as she exhauled a huge flame flew towards the 'cops' and set them on fire.

"That'll do it." Lizzy thought.

She placed her head back down and went back to sleep. Lucan was stunned." Holy cow...." He whispered.




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Devan's was shocked that the girl could breath fire. He observed from a few miles away...without binnoculars. His eye then caught something. a few buildings away he saw a man Putting together a sniper rifle.

" Hmmmm...." Devan smiled and then looked down at the shoes that he got from the Sientist's office." Please work..." Devan whispered and then took a few steps back...He then ran and jumped off the building.

The sniper went mindlessly to his work. He aimed the rifle at the pilot of the helicopter.

" Oy, Ozzy!" The sniper looked behind him to see a pipe hit him in the face. He dropped the rife on the ground and then was dazed for a second...just enough for Devan's to push him off the edge.
"AAHHHHHH!!"
Devan's took the rifle and took off the scope. He doesn't need it.




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Lizzy-

Lucan made his way back to the helicopter. Sophia, Trinity, Receria and another boy were waiting for them. Lucan stared at the new group memeber.

"Whoe is he?" He wondered.




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*****Ummmm, Maki, your Lizzy, not Lucan, play only your character's emotions. You can usually get away with talking someone else, just don't do what they are thinking or anything.****
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**I'll just do Devan arriving. Pay attention Ghost!!**

"Dammit." I said, and used some more choice swearwords. "Hurry up Lucan."

"Why are you so eager to get away? They'll hardly find us here." Trinity said quietly.

She spoke too soon, I heard footsteps outside.

"Oh really?" I asked, taking my gun and beckoning to the others.

We went outside.

"Hands up where we can see them!" I said, trying hard to stop my voice from trembling. What if they recognised me? Would they kill me? Would they send me back to my uncle? What would he do if I turned up at his apartment again?

There was a rustling in the trees. "I knew there must have been a helicopter". said a voice.

"Hands up!" said Receria, her voice much stronger than my own.

"Wow, wow," said a boy's voice and he appeared. "I thought the fire-breathing girl was up here."

"Lizzy," Trinity said very quietly, holding her gun up higher.

"Where is she? What have you done to them?"

"Nothing!" he said, holding his hands up defensively. "Nearly killed me that's all. The question is, who are you?"
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*Sorry TN*

Lizzy-

The sounds of people shouting awoke Lizzy. She struggled off Lucan's shoulder.

" relax." he told her.

He slipped her off his shoulder. Lizzy looked around." Where are the others?"

Lizzy grabbed her gun from a strap around her leg. Lucan also held a gun.

"HEY! There! There are the murderers!" A man yelled.

Lizzy and Lucan looked behind to see a huge group of 'cops' rushing towards them. Lucan shot at them. Lizzy grabbed his arm.

"Come on we need to flee before we are even more noticed." Lizzy told him.

He nodded and they ran for it.




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Hello?! I hope this isn't going to die!!!!
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