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(I'm gonna make Itachi seem stupid..lol)

Hachiko~

Hachi stared at Ume, unblinking. "What are you going to do? You've only got ten days now, to decide." She asked.

"How do you know that?" Ume asked, her eyes still glowing blue.

"I was once in the Akatsuki. My father is Pein." Hachiko explained and she stepped away from the girl. She threw her kunia into the bushes, hitting Itachi's robe-like-thing and sticking him to a tree.

"I-Itachi has been here t-this whole time?" Ume asked astonished. Hachiko nodded, still glaring into the bushes. All of a sudden a shiriken flew out of the bushes, missing her by an millimeter.

"Tobi, your aim still sucks." Hachiko growled. A tall man with an orange spiral mask stepped out of the bushes.

"Smart as ever." Tobi said, in a sarcastic whisper, not meant to be heard.
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Ume stared at Tobi and Itachi.

"You don't have to stalk me you know." Ume giggled.

Ume stood up she didn't want to deal with them." Hachicko I'm leaving. I do not wish to fight anymore today."

The blue haired ninja walked away back towards the village.

"We'll take our leave as well." Itachi said.

Then they vanished. Hachicko sighed." Ume you idiot."




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[Kaylee]

She heard a twig snap. THe little girl sat up looking around wildly, she couldn't see anything. Her heart had begun to beat faster. She smoothed her dress out with her hands pretending not to be afraid. Another twig snapped. She stood up and looked into the cluster of trees borderign the vast field. She took a step towards the trees. It was probably just Nikro, messing with her.
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Nikro-


Kikro walked slowly towards Kaylee keeping his eyes on the trees she was walking towards. He had heard the noise to, and he was nervous. He saw a dark figure run behind a tree and he ran to Kaylee and swooped her up just as a guy stepped out of the trees two throwing stars in his hand. Nikro looked the guy over putting Kaylee down behind him, holding her still his a firm hand.
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Ume ran towards the village- a sea of trees on both sides of the path. SHe stopped. The sound of shurikens being thrown drew her attention. The blue haired ninja pulled out a kunia and ran towards the noise.




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[Kaylee]

Nikro swooped the little girl up into his arms as a claoked figure emerged from the woods. He set her down and she looked up at him confused. The cloaked figure had thrown stars, they had been pretty. The claoked man's hood was still up as he advanced on the pair. He stopped a few feet away from them, Kaylee was peeking out from behind Nikro's knee. The man squatted down to Kaylee's eye level before dropping his hood.
"Uncle!" she said pulling her hand from Nikro and running to her father's younger brother. He looked a little more worn and had a few more cuts on his hand and face, but he was her uncle.
"Kaylee! Look at you, how you've grown!" She jumped into his arms as he picked her up and spun her around.
"Where have you been all this time!" She said knowing that he was a traveler and had no real home.
"How about we go home and say hi to your mommy and daddy and then I will tell you all about my great adventures? huh? Sound good?"
"Yes."
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(Kay...Tobi = Obito Uchiha!! Say Obito as many tymes you can in thirty seconds and you'll start saying Tobi!! Haha! And Tobi and Itachi look like they're still 18!)

Hachiko~

Hachiko heard the commotion of Kaylee through the woods. She sighed and chased after Itachi and Tobi.

"Why are you doing this?" She whispered to both of them once they were all together.

"We are after Ume." Tobi pointed out the obvious.

"No duh. But why her?" Hachiko growled.

"I dunno. Your dad just said to bring Ume to him, and...you as well." Itachi admitted.

"The old man just doesn't under stand." Hachiko giggled. Tobi took off his mask and stared at her.

"He's not that old. He's only thirty-two." Tobi smiled.

"Yeah. Thirty-two is the new fifty-two." Itachi joked along. The two Uchihas laughed together as Hachiko smiled.

"We obviously don't hold a grudge against each other." Hachiko said. The two Uchihas nodded and smiled. "So I ask you...please give Ume...more time."

Both of them stared at her, debating the issue.
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Ume looked to see everything was ok and that it was Kaylee's uncle with her. So she turned around and back onto the path.


flash back-

"A perfect ninja, no feelings and no regret. It will have unlimited power, almost riviling that of the nine tailed fox demon." A scientist said.

"Well she does have demon blood in her, is it the Curberus demon?" A woman asked.

"Uhh yah that one... With her healing abitilies and a body much stronger than ours she will be perfect for our clan." The man added.

Ume floated in the large glass bowl filled with a strange liquid- tubes and wires in her body, keeping tract of her body health, feeding her, draining her bladder and pumping her with medication.
The blue haired girl opened her eyes slowly. She looked like the same age she is now. Ume carefully placed her plam on the glass. Showing she was awake.

"Where am I? " She wondered.

Flash back ended-

The blue haired ninja rubbed her arms. Just thinking of the past made her shiver.
Ume knew why Akatuski wanted her.




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Hachiko~

Tobi and Itachi looked at each other and smiled. "We'll make her decision time longer...if you run with us." Itachi smiled and handed Hachiko her old clothes. Her under clothes were in his hand along with the hat, robe, sandals, ring, and even the polish. Hachiko smiled.

"Only once." She laughed and stepped behing a tree to change quickly.

After she had changed, the threesom were off to stupid stuff again. They sped past Ume and up to the Hokage's building. "Wanna screw around with Naruto." Tobi announced as her threw papers everywhere around the room. Hachiko and Itachi laugh aloud. All of a sudden the door opened and Hachiko quickly pulled a mask over her face. Ume walked into the room and stared at the three, Akatsuki members.
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"Is Naruot-sama in?" Ume asked.

" Nope sorry..." Tobi said.

Ume stared at the 3 akatuski members. The hokake's office was a mess.

"Ume-kun, I like to inform you that we have lengthened your desision time." Itachi informed Ume.

She nodded, turned around and walked out of the room.




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Hachiko~

Hachiko pulled her mask back down and began to laugh softly. "Thanks guys."

"No problem, Hachiko." Tobi chuckled, unaware that Ume heard him.
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[Kaylee]

The little girl sat at the table in the kitchen eating vanilla ice cream while wondering what her father needed to talk so desperatly about to her uncle that he had interupted his story about the giant ladybugs he found in a jungle once during his travels. Nikro was sitting across from her unblinking.
"Baby don't eat to fast, and don't drip on your dress." Her mother kissed the top of her blonde head and left the kitchen to join her father and unlce.
"What do you think they are talking about?" She asked Nikro looking up at him with big blue eyes.
"Nothing you should be concerned about." Suddenly shouting came from the other room.
"Both of you stop it!" Her mother screamed.
"You stay out of this!" Her father yelled back, "He has come here to try and take our daughter and you stay so calm!" Kaylee looked up at Nikro with a confused expression.
"Where would uncle want to take me."
"Don't worry about it." He said setting her empty bowl in the sink and scooping her up into his arms and carrying her to her room.
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Ume froze. The door behind her was shut but she heard it. What Tobi had said. He said the name Hachicko. A tear came gentaly down her cheek. She was scared, but why? Perhaps she knew that she might have to kill Hachicko one day.

Ume continued to walk away. She knew what she had to do.




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Hachiko~

Hachiko ran out the door and down the hallway, Tobi and Itachi close behind. She tossed the cloak back at them and stopped in front of Ume.

"So, Ume. Lemme ask. You gonna join or not?" Hachiko smiled at Ume, not letting any of her hope that Ume would say no, overtake her.
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Ume stared at her. Her eyes cold like a frozen lake.

"You know that is for me to decide when I chose to." Ume hissed.

Hachicko gave her a strange look." What?"

Ume sighed." Forget it, I am leaving anyways."

Hachicko tried to stop her but Ume forced her way through and out of the building.



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