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Okay. Since I've been on YWS I have not found a Naruto storybook!! In my opinion Naruto rocks! Soooo...here it is.

Plot: No plot yet. Help would be nice.

Rules:

-No God-Modding
-No killing off other characters without permission
-No RPing already made characters (Naruto, Sakura, Neji, ect.)
-No being an acadmey kid. Every one should have graduated.
-You may use actual charcters in your writing, but not as your character!
-Three charies per account
-Have fun!!

My charies!!
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Name: Hachiko

Age: 15

Rank: Jounin

Village: Konaha

Occupation: Sensei at the academy.

Appearance: http://liloochan.deviantart.com/art/Ninja-17832531

Eyes: http://s196.photobucket.com/albums/aa40 ... nt=EYE.jpg

Personallity: Everything

History: Taken by the Akatsuki leader, Pein, at birth. Joined the Akatsuki against her will. Ran away from the Akatsuki at age 12. She is Pein's daughter. She bleached her hair but her eye color is natural.

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Name: Ren

Age: 17

Rank: Chunnin

Village: Konoha

Occupation: Prime Shinobi

Appearance: http://pinali.deviantart.com/art/Ninja-Pinari-6159082 Only taller.

Personallity: Everything

History: Born and is now alive!! :D
Last edited by LunaBuna43 on Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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what's Naruto?
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Name- Ume(plum blossom)

gender- female

rank- chunnin

age- 15

village- Konaha

appearance- http://www.elfwood.com/art/l/i/linute/f ... g.jpg.html umm just take away the crown and wings ^_^

personality- She is brave and is true to her word. She is not the best ninja but she has heart and guts. She is very kind hearted. Some say she should not be a ninja but she proves them wrong. She is shy though and rarely speaks with people. She does have a temper though. Her abilities are strange and she had unusual chakra- it is a dark purple.

history- she was a test tube baby. An experiment to make the perfect ninja. With no emotion and unlimited power, but something went wrong and she had a heart.
She was saved by The 5th hokage. Unknowing to her Akatuski wish to have her.
She pretends to be a bad ninja but the truth is she is very powerful. Sometimes it can take over her.

occupation- she is a part of the ANBU Black. She rarely goes on missions, mostly spends her time walking around and training. She mostly keeps to herself.

*oh, umm you can make the plot how about, we make it that the Akatuski is trying to convince Ume to join them. She doesn't know what to do. Maybe the characters are trying to convince her not to go. Then stuff happens. ^_^ Is that OK? Or not?
Last edited by Maki-Chan on Mon Feb 11, 2008 12:26 am, edited 1 time in total.




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*Ok! I hoped you would join Maki-chan!! That plot sounds good. I'll think about it, kay? I like your plot very much. though. And Rory, Naruto is an anime show of ninja's...*
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Ok, I might join later, if I don't remind me. I have to go.
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I'm gonna start! Any1 can join but the suspense is just killin me!!

Hachiko~

"You're all dismissed." Hachiko announced to the academy students. They all cheered and ran out the door. "Remember to train!" She yelled as they disappeared into the village. She smiled and walked out. Looking up at the Hokage's building she sighed. Naruto Uzamaki was the sixth Hokage. Just like he always wanted to be.

"What are you doing?" A voice interupted Hachiko's thoughts.
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Name: Nikro

Age: 16

Rank: Jounin

Village: Konaha

Appearance: http://aleation.deviantart.com/art/Ninja-34413921 (This one is him in his normal form.)
http://surgicalheist.deviantart.com/art ... ja-8959941 (This is him out of it.)

Eyes:
http://mirabel.deviantart.com/art/Cat-s-Eye-26145395 (Just the eye color)

Personallity: You'll see :D

History: He never knew his family. And has always been on his own.
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Ume walked past the academy- performing her usual check on the village. She spotted a long white hair woman staring at the monument for the hokage.

"What are you doing?" Ume asked.

Her voice volume was a little bit too loud, and it startled the woman staring at the 6Th hokage's head in the mountain.

She turned to face Ume. The blue haired ninja knew who the white haired woman was.

"Hachiko why are you out here?" She asked.

Ume didn't know that the academy classes were already over.




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Hackiko~

Hachiko noticed the girl as Ume. "Oh. Hello, Ume. I'm...i'm just daydreaming." Hachiko laughed. "The academy classes are out for a while. It's for the chuunin exams. There won't be many teachers avilable so today was the last day."

"Oh." Ume replied.

[Ren]

Ren ran through the trees. Making sure everything was set up for the chuunin exams. He smiled as he saw Nikro. Jumping up into the tree above Nikro, he began to throw kunais left of the Jounnin, trying to scare him.
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"oh" Ume responded.

Hackiko smiled at Ume, but the blue haired ninja just nodded. She did not really like talking with people.

"I should go." Ume informed Hackiko.

The white haired ninja bowed and Ume walked away.


Ume had to much on her mind for useless chit chat. She had to make a very important decision.

Flash back-


Ume was doing her regular early morning training, by the river. She was practicing her chakra control and use. Her chakra was different, instead of the normal blue color hers was a dark purple- almost black.

Ume was standing completely still, then a noise broke her concentration. Someone was watching her.

"Who's there?" Ume calmly asked.

There was a noise in the bushes and out came a man. He had long black hair and was dressed in a long black cloak with red clouds on it. He wore a leaf headband with a strike mark across the leaf sign. The man's dark onyx eyes gazed deeply into Ume's soul.

"Itachi..." Ume whispered.

Her words did not have a hint of hate in them- not a hint of fear either.

"Ume-kun, it is nice to see you again." He answered.

His calm voice soothed Ume, but she knew what he could do.

"What do you want?" She asked.

"You know that one of our members are dead, and we need a replacement." Itachi told Ume.

The blue haired ninja's eyes widened." You mean that the Akatuski's leader wishes for me to join?"

"We cannot deny your skills and special abilities. We just waited for you to be old enough." he stopped.
"You have 12 days to decide." Itachi finished.

Ume nodded and the black haired ninja vanished.

End of flash back-

"What am I going to do? I like being here, but there is nothing really important for me to stay." Ume thought.

She looked up at the sky." Well, at least I have 12 days."




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I don't know anything about any of this..I don't even watch anime stuff..but I am joining at the request of Luna

Name: Kaylee

Age: 6 1/2

Rank: (I don't know the names of the them!) lowest rank (!?!?!?!)

Appearance: Soft blonde hair that falls curly to her waist, bright blue eyes, a petite frame (she is only 6), usually found in a dress that her mother puts her in in an attempt to make her someone like a girl but by the end of the day the dress has mud or stains on it and she can be found with a few cuts and bruises here and there.

Personality: Angelic, sarcastic at times, tomboy, wraps you around her finger, is very powerful/stong for her age and is anxious to become a ninja (ninja right??), can usually get what she wants, works hard, trusts people too much sometimes.

Village: Konaha

History: only 6 doesn't ahve much of one..well one she can remember.

*she is a reincarnation of a great warrior ninja chick but doesn't know it...she needs someone to protect her...could play a part in the story line..idk?*
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Hachiko~

Hachiko watched Ume walk away. She remembered when she first came to this village. Ume and her both were only twelve, and Hachiko had just escaped the Akatsuki, Ume was her first unevil ninja encounter, besides Tsunade-san. Hachiko turned and walked towards the river. She sat down on the bank and began tossing rocks into the water.
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Ume headed towards the ramen shack. She loved ramen- that was where she first met the 6Th hokage; Naruto Uzumaki. Ume never really talked with him.

The blue haired ninja changed her mind and walked past the ramen shack and headed towards the 6th hokage. Maybe he had a mission for Ume.
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Kay...a few things.

1. The 5th, Tsunade-san, is gone...
2. Naruto is the new Hokage and has been for two years.
3. Nobody in this storybook should have actually met Yodaime since Naruto is now twenty, so unless you are over 20 then you shouldn't have actually met Yodiame.

~Sorry just had to set thing strait...
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