Assasin's Creed

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Dali:

I sighed. "But I want to marry you!" I just about cried. I couldn't stand it! I did start crying. "He's never going to be happy. Please..."


Alex:

He sighed. "I can't. I don't know why. I think I'm sort of afraid to lose her. but, I'm just...very protective. I'm used to him as her bf...but her husband? What if she runs away again? Does he know how to handle the situation? Does he know what she's feeling most of the time? Can he take care of her? I'm just....worried."




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Ryder---

Ryder smiled and kissed her lips quieting her tears. "I didn't mean we wouldn't. What he said was good enough for me if it was you." He sighed, "I just don't want him mad at you."


Velna--

"Alex, he knows what he is doing. He will be able to take care of her. You understand that he is the same with me, but he knows you won't hurt me. YOu should be able to trust him. He IS my brother. He'll take care of her. Why can't you just accept that?" She sighed, "You wont lose her."

She was getting so frustrated now, she just wanted to find a horse and ride until everything seemed fine. She knew that wouldn't happen though.



***K, so I'm trying to think of something that could happen to her. Especially if it would help Alex get to like Ryder. :D***
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Dali:

"But your still not happy, are you?"

Alex:

He sighed. "Look, I'm sorry."

"No your not!" She glsred at him.

**he's being selfish. the focus needs to be shifted off of him. You could have her pretend to go out with someone else...or something. Idk. something to make him not be selfish...**




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***Hmmmmm, he would just get mad if she turned her attention on someone else. If you think up anything tell me. But I'll try and think something up.***

Velna---

"Everything you do is for yourself!! You know, if I didn't have a gut feeling I was wrong I would say you were using me." She fought back tears. "I'm going to go back to the brotherhood. Don' think about coming after me, cause I'll just take off. Think about it, ok?" She turned on her heel and stormed off.

Ryder---


"I get to marry the girl of my dreams, of course I'm happy he laughed. "I just don't want to come between you and your brother. I know you two love each other like I love Velna. But don't worry, I'm deffiantly going to make sure nothing happens to keep us from getting married."
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Dali:

I smiled and hugged him. "Want to do the honeymoon early?" I asked shyly.

Alex:

He stood there dazed. Then he ran toward Ryder. "Your sisters really mad at me! What do I do?!"

**Yes, he would. But he would eventually want her just to be happy, and then, he wouldn't be selfish anymore.**




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Ryder---

Ryder was about to answer when Alex ran over. "Your sisters really mad at me! What do I do?!" Ryder sighed and looked at Alex.

"What did you do?" He demanded,


Velna--

Velna found a horse and quickly pushed it towards the brotherhood. Her mind was buzzing as she tried to think of somethign to do to make Alex see what he had done. She rode up to the gate and it opened up letting her in closing behind her.

"Your back alone?" A deep voice demanded from behind her. She spun around to see one of the Masters.

"Yes." She replied looking at him.

"Where is your brother and the others?" He asked,

"They had something to do, I decided to come back early." She replied, "Did you need something?"
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Alex:

He sighed with frustration. "How the hell am I supposed to know?!" he took a deep breath. "She was mad because I didn't give my blessing on you two...and then she took off and said I was selfish."

Dali:

I held back a laugh.

Alex glared at me. "You think this is funn1?!"

"No...but I think it's true. You are extremely selfish."

**is Velna going to start dating the other Master?**




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**** I think she understands that will get him to think. :D So yes****

Ryder---

"Where did she go?" RYder asked, he didn't want her to get hurt.

"THe brotherhood." Alex replied tight lipped.

"She'll be fine." Ryder sighed, He pulled Dali close.


Velna---

An idea finally came to Velna. She smiled at the master.

"When will they be back?" He asked walking over to her horse.

"Not sure. Depeneds." She smiled.
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Alex:

His eyes narrowed. "I KNOW SHE'LL BE ALRIGHT!!" he fumed. "I want her back in my arms!"

Dali:

I burst out laughing. I couldn't help it. Velna had every right to try and find someone else. It was too hilarious.




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Ryder---

Ryder smiled, "Alex, this is probably why she left. You want, you don't think what she needs."

"Whats that supposed to mean?" Alex demanded,

"What if she wants to be treated differently. Does she ever try and hint at something she wants you to do?" Ryder smiled, "You need to figure out what she needs, not jsut waht you do. Isn't that right, Dali?"


Velna--

"Are you and Alex dating?" He asked as she dismounted.

"Were." She replied grabbing the reins for her horse and started for the stables.

"Really." He got in step with her and crossed his arms behind his back. "Soo, your availible?"

"Yes." She smiled at him flashing her eyes.
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Dali:

I smiled. "Exactly. Until you can learn to think of her more than yourself, she probably won't come back. Why don't you go home, think, clear your head. We'll be back tomorrow. I'll talk to Dali if you want to figure out what's wrong, but that's it." I snuggled closer to Ryder.

Alex grumbled but left.

"So...how about an early honeymoon?" I asked. "Just...be gentle...please." I begged. I was still sore...and I still hurt from the rough treatment of the night before.

Alex:

He arrived at the Brotherhood. He saw Dali talking with someone...and he looked enthralled. It was all the selfcontrol it took for him not to rush up to the man and hit him.

Fine, he thought. Two can play at that game. A blond passed in front of his vision.

"Hey, what you doing all alone?"

She giggled and batted her eyes.




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***Velna, not Dali. :P***

Ryder---

"Are you sure?" He asked, "I don't want to hurt you." He said putting his forehead on her's smiling at her.


Velna--

Velna laughed as the Master tired to crack a funny joke. She saw Alex talking to a blond out of the corner of her eye. She didn't care, he didn't care about her. He only cared for himself. Ty, the Master, smiled at her and slowly pulled her towards him and kissed her lips softly.

"I hope that.." He started she pulled his face back to hers and kissed him.
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Dali:

I smiled. "I'm sure. Just be gentle. okay?"

Alex:

He fumed. He pulled the blond to him and kissed her passionately. She giggled. "Doing anything tonight?"

She shook her head. "No."

"Want to be?" he grinned. If Velna was trying to make him jealous, then he could play the very same card.




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Ryder---

"You sure?" He didn't want to hurt her. No matter what. She nodded, "Alright." He smiled and kissed her lips softly but passionatly.


Velna---

Velna pulled away and put her horse in it's stall. The master walked behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist. "Wanna have some fun?"

She laughed, "Not tonight. Maybe some other time." She smiled kissing his lips softly. She walked out of hte stall. "See you tomorrow." She grinned walking towards her house not even looking at Alex. Let him destroy another girl's heart.
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