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Can someone post something?
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Anyone? It's lonely.
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)




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Trinity-

"Let's go, we need to get this done quickly. Then get back here and hide." Trent said looking at them. She nodded, they both shifted form into little fleas and waited for the others.




**All I could think of. Grrrrrrr**
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Once your characters get back I may be able to think of something to post.
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Like what? wait, am I one of those characters? No idea.
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)




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I'm a little disapointed in you guys. If you get confused you just give up on a storybook? When I get confused, I don't quit. No, you know what I do? I read over what we've already written! The information is already there, all you have to do is turn a page and there it is.
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***I'm not giving up. Just stuck, grrrrrrrrrr, if no one posts soon I'll try and do another. ***
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Asher looked at Amber. "Go with them. They may need your help disabling the guards again."

Amber smiled. "Sure thing."

Asher knew that look. He sighed and said, "You can't kill them."

Amber frowned. "Why not?"

"The other guards will notice the absence of one of their men. It might give away our presence as well as delay our plan."

Amber sighed. "Fine, I won't kill anyone before we start the next phase of our plan." Asher untied and ungaged the guard they took with them. Amber slid into his body.

"Come back soon," Asher said to Katrina, Amber, Trent and Trinity as they began to walk away.
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*Great, now I feel like a failure to the storybook.Still not givin up hope*

Katrina-

I flew across the floor in shadow form with Trent, Trinity, and Amber in the guard's body. I could hear the crew in the distance, but I wasn't worried, I was a shadow at the time.

*UUUugggghhhh, Man this sucks!!!! Stupid writers block, I thought I got over you.*
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Trinity-

Trinity lept up on Amber's shoulder and she saw Trent do the same. They were small enough in flea form that no one would be able to see them. She waited until they got to the storage room to shift back to normal size. Amber had closed the door and they quickly worked on gathering food.
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(Since this whole gathering food thing confused us all in the first place, why don't we just skip it, say they already got the food, came back, and began planning their next move? We shouldn't let the storybook drag on for something so trivial. Who agrees?)
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((((Ok))))
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((((Me! Cause I'm already pretty darn confuzed))))
I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time. :)




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(Hey, guess what? I just got my new laptop last night! It's super fast! I always had to use my dad's computer because his was the fastest and most efficient in the house, which is sad because his last upgrade was about five years ago. The only problem I'm having with my laptop are the key bindings. The question mark is shift bound to the six key, which isn't what the keyboard says. When I use the key it's supposed to be bound to I get this: É. Other than that, everything's running smoothly.)

(Okay, so it's agreed. We'll skip the whole finding food thing and say they already did it. Once your characters get back I'll post something. Also, can one of you PM kitty and tell her we'd still like her to be a part of this storybook. Don't forget to mention we've straightened out the story so there's no more confusion.)
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(Hey, one of you has to post your characters getting back before I can do anything.)
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