Well, I will agree with you. SENIORS ROCK! CLASS 08 BABY!
However the piece was ok. It was kind of, plain, little bit simple, and it didn't really have a point. It has a lot of potential to become a great poem, or prose, but as it stands now, it is not really all that great.
Hurray to the graduates of 08! xD
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player, that struts and frets his hour upon the stage, and then is heard no more; it is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing. ~William Shakespeare~
Scripts need love too!!!
Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. — Mark Twain