Short Prologue

The first paragraph really draws you in. It was good. I think it could do with being a little lengthier, but other than that it was great.

Not much else to say. Good job.

Yeah, this is really short. I think prologues should be longer than just one paragraph but that's just my opinion.

Otherwise, I think you have a good start here. I mean, I haven't read any of your other prologues before this one so I can't really compare them (I'll just take your word for it that this one is better )

Anyway, I believe you could lengthen this out so that it is longer and maybe squeeze in some more descriptions so that I can imagine what is going on in the scene. I can't really picture your main character from this.

Umm, that's really all I can come up with right now. Keep Writing

It was a good read, if not a little short.

I hope to read more.

Although this is short I think it is really mysterious, and I certainly want to read more!
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