Dreamt

I drifted deeper and deeper into my soul.
Folds of it swept over me,
Rocking me softly to sleep.
As I loitered on the edge of consciousness,
I thought I saw your face above me.
Suddenly, I tried to get back to you,
To reach you.
I thrashed and twisted
Trying to break free.
But sweeping tendrils of softness now became solid bands of iron,
Dragging me deeper and deeper into the Dream-realm.

Very nice. It gives a very strong picture.

Yeah, I could visualize it very well. It was very cool, I like it. Very strong poem and has good words.

very nice, as everyone else said, you can really visualize it and feel it. Keep up these nice poems, you are really great!

I really like the rhythm of the poem. It's well written and the words used are interesting too.

Everything that they said! I liked it for all those reasons!

I really like! its very powerful and it has a good rythem, very nice.

Wow, I like it.

Reads really well and has deep meanings.

Especially the last two lines.

Hey
Ya this poem is very cool. I loved the first line good stuff!

Loved the wording. I gave me a great image of the poem. Nice job!

Ew. So this is what I wrote like three freaking years ago. *cringes*

Please. No crits. Just let this one die.