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All critiques (no matter how harsh) are definitely appreciated on the above story and any of the following chapters! I'll return any critique I receive to the best of my ability Thanks in advance!

Don't beg for critiques.

Everyone's digging up old topics today! I guess kitty15's challenge is having effect.

In any case, this should have been locked already. The best to get critiques is by critiquing someone else's work then asking them to return the favor.