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[intro]
Shit happens for a reason.

[First verse]

The first verse is about a bitch I know,
Who lost his job, so he sucks dick for dough.
Rick you a bitch and a coward,
You go against me, you'll be devoured.
You started the shit, now listen,
But you is not the only one I'm dissin.

[Chorus]

Bitches barking up the wrong tree,
Wanting to assinate me,
Now look bitch, you can't beat me.

[Second verse]

Now it's time to take a stab at the wife,
Bitch you failed with the knife.
You don't want it with Andy, you don't want it with me.
I'm back on this reppin like a "G",
Do yall really want to fuck with me??

[Chorus]

Bitches barking up the wrong tree,
Wanting to assinate me,
Now look bitch, you can't beat me.

[Third verse]

Now the end is finally here,
Fighting me is like fighting a bear.
You think you won, bitch please,
This little bitch try to rep the G's.
If you really wanted me dead,
you should've aimed at my head.

[Chorus]

Bitches barking up the wrong tree,
Wanting to assinate me,
Now look bitch, you can't beat me.




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Wait... aren't "bitches" females? Why are you refering to this guy as a bitch? Or maybe you got the wrong gender?

It's kind of confusing.
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you sound angry...
And you overused the word "Bitch" too much. try using some other colorful words. but other than that...nice.
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Did you know that 'bitches are women.

The first verse is about a bitch I know,
Who lost his job, so he sucks dick for dough.
Rick you a bitch and a coward,
You go against me, you'll be devoured.
You started the shit, now listen,
But you is not the only one I'm dissin.


The last line is
But you ARE not.

I love the Chorus.

Good work
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Technically "Bitch" means female dog...and people just refere to women as that.




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Bitch is used when describing males too in a lot of hip-hop. Its a derogatory term regardless.

I'm not huge on this lyrics, they don't seem to have a good flow, the rhyme scheme can be pretty obvious (wife, knife... head, dead) and the three verses seem pretty unrelated.


You should make the verses longer and more relevant to the theme, telling more of a story in them.


I am really glad that people are posting rhymes in the lyrics section.
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=O nice song man.....u got some skill.....keep up the good work^_^



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