My Hair

Oo, drama pours from this piece. A girl and her hair seem to get together like a girl and the B who stole her ex-boyfriend.


Great job (there's really nothing to critique, and it makes me sad....)

Yea, I'm not a haiku person. But, I've expressed that several times in the past few days so I won't go into the details haha.

And haiku's are characteristic of nature.

But, it was still cute *cringe* mmm, err it was still interesting.

I liked it a lot!
I thought it was really cool!
Please don't get dreadlocks!

I have no clue what you look like, but I'm sure you'll look better with out them. If you get them and decide you don't want them, you would need to cut them off! Then you'd be bald!

But then again...
Dreadlocks DO look pretty cool!

I think it's funny how I still get comments....

Yeah, I didn't get those dread locks. I really planned on it though!

Thanks everyone.

I am going to get dreadlocks. They're so cool.

This poem is hilarious. It's funny how minimal your poems are, and yet how condensed they are. Simple amazing.

Honestly, I loved this,
It was light and free..

Especially the second line...


8.5/10

lol cute. maybe i'll get dreadlocks now, naybe not. u kno. hey maybe i'll grow dreadlocks, never shower, and get pregnant. your poem has inspired me.

Lol. This should be a senryu, not a haiku, right? Haikus are more specific, nature-centered and sober. Senryus tend more towards the blithe and ironic. Otherwise--dreadlocks? Ew! The always smell so bad, lol. Keep your natural pretty hair, Suz!

Hehe. This was funny. I've never read a haiku like this one. Usually, the ones I read are about nature and use very pretty language.

I have naturally straight hair so I've never used a hair straightener in my life. I don't do much with my hair. Usually, I leave it down. I tried curling it the other day, didn't really work out.