The Twisted and Completely Out There Story

"Good, good." Jack smiled. Kevin had just commited suicide. They never needed him. He was a ploy to get Alexx to them.
"Yes...." The Cat said. "A perfect ending to a worthless creature. Did you tell Him yet?" It asked Jack.
"No, but I will." He turned to go.
"Wait." The Cat said.
"What?"
"Bring Jordan to me. He still may prove useful." The Cat said as he brought out a large knife. He set it down on a table.
"Huh?"
"Death could use a new helper." He laughed. Jordan would make a perfect peace offering.
"No." Jack's voice turned deeper.
"What?" The Cat's back started to arch.
"Stupid Animal. I want Jordan's power yet. Dream-poisoning is a good power. You kill him, Death will have two offerings!" Jack's eye started to glow. He glowed red and rose from the ground. His eyes rolled up inside his head.
"I am so sorry Master." The Cat laid down.
"No!! You shall die!" a bolt of black shot from "Jack's" hand. It struck The Cat full force. He knocked over the knife table. It struck his head, nowhere near killing him. But the blast started to dissolve him.
"No! Not Death's Kingdom!" The Cat was almost gone."No!!!!"

sorry, but what is a revamp? I'm clueless.

Bells~~~

I am sorry, I have read all the comments about new characters and I have no clue whats going on in the story, but never the less I am adding a new character.


Sara
half vampire
black hair
green eyes
pale complexion
rosy cheeks
16
has accepted the fact that she'll never fall in love
goes back and forth from protagonist to antagonist it just depends on what has happened and how she feels as with the rest of us

Sara walked down the busy street, looking very beautiful and as easy prey to anyone who would want to take advantage of her. That's what she wanted, she was hungry. She was hoping that some scum bag would follow her down some alley and try something. She got more pleasure out of killing those who tried to kill her. It was a surprise that someone hadn't gotten the best of her yet.

She turned a corner and another putting her into an alley. It was a filthy alley, garbage cans tipped over and the dumpster smelled of blood, not fresh blood. Fresh blood sickened her but that kind of blood, the blood that didn't come from killing would've made her puke if she had gotten any closer.

She pulled her foot up against the wall and pulled out a cigarette. There were quick foot steps coming towards her, she liked to have a calm expression when she killed. She lit the cigarette just as Peter and Hanna came around the corner.

"Peter?" Sara said, "who- what- never mind I don't think I want to know." She dropped her cigarette and stepped on it.

"Sara we need your help, like badly."
"Like with what?" Sara replied using the same mocking tone she had always used when he used the word "like" in any context.
"Wait," Hanna whispered, "how do we know she's not still with him?" her voice was so low not even Sara's vampire hearing could pick it up.
"Sara are you still associated with Him?"

Sara rolled her eyes and dug through her purse for another cigarette, "that jerk off? No way." She put the cigarette in her mouth and lit it. "If you're here to kill me for it give it your best shot."

Peter backed off, "no, no that's not why were her. We need you to find some, kids for us."

I think I'm just gonna start over from teh very beginning...Heck, I think I might make a new one...i'll post the link momentarily for all those who are interested

everyone who has already posted on this at least once will be emailed this link; for anyone else who happens upon this and is interested:

viewtopic.php?p=185795#185795

Enjoy!!!

Woops! Sorry. I don't mean anything by what I did. I hope y'all can forgive me....

that's true, thats just what he does. He's demented like that. so you can't really be mad at him.