Interesting. Very interesting. This would be a very good piece of art, as of itself, for there are no real artistic flaws in it (except the wings are way too small).
I do hover have some crits for it being cover art.
~~~The "Book 1" Should be smaller, and not aligned with the title.
~~~Also, even though you may have kept it confedential, where is your name supposed to go.
~~~The font really isn't that good for this. Maybe try a little more mature of a font. If your guy was older, maybe this font would work, but since the guy looks pretty young, this title needs at least a little sense of maturity.
Its pretty good overall, but not the best for on the shelves. Keep on trying and itll be great soon enough.
