A Romance

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strange lightning
crackles when near,
crush split swift
away, aches
soothes stings
forgets

Time removes all things,
makes them again.
Each thing discharges and absorbs energy.
Each thing changes
and changes
until it is itself again.

So crackle,
soothe.

Forget.




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Well, it's definetly strange, but I expected no less from you. :wink:

I found your seemingly random capatalization to be very interesting. And yet I know it serves some purpose...You wouldn't do something without purpose, would you? Unless you would get some amusement out of knowing that I'll stare at it for hours, trying to figure out what it means. :o

soothes stings


The use of these two contradicting words both together is fabulous. :idea:

It conjures images of evolution to me, honestly. Maybe even life beginning, not even evolving.

T-E-E-S-F....hmm. I'm no good at puzzles. :(

Until I can pull more from this, this is all I can offer. :)

As always,

Miss POKE




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it is so true, i really liked it

Time removes all things,
makes them again.
Each thing discharges and absorbs energy.
Each thing changes
and changes
until it is itself again.

thats my favorite part :)



Don't say you don't have enough time. You have exactly the same number of hours per day that were given to Helen Keller, Pasteur, Michaelangelo, Mother Teresa, Leonardo da Vinci, Thomas Jefferson, and Albert Einstein.
— H. Jackson Brown