Hello,
I’m writing a fantasy short story quite dark, as usual and there’s a scene where my main character walks through a garden at night, and I wanted the sensations to be rooted in something concrete… not just ‘it was cold’ or vague stuff like that. So I got it into my head to centre the whole description around a scent, and I thought of the scent of Tilia, you know, lime blossom that slightly sweet, almost heavy scent that clings to the warm air. It seemed perfect to me for creating an atmosphere that’s both soothing and slightly oppressive at the same time… like the character smelling something sweet but knowing it’s not normal, that it’s a warning sign. The problem is, I don’t know if the scent of Tilia is something readers will actually visualise, or if it’ll just go over everyone’s heads. Do you think olfactory references in storytelling grab the reader’s attention, or do they just confuse them?
