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I'm looking forward to your comments, impressions and constructive suggestions.
Good day/night to you all, arr me mates

SylvanusGrace

Liminality wrote:Spoiler
Hi there! Oh these excerpts are super interesting. The narrative voice feels unique, and I like the idea of the stream and the forest being named characters. Best of luck with LMS!

Liminality wrote:Spoiler
Hi again! Congrats on making it to week 10! The idea of a dagger made out of soil (several parts ago) is really interesting and highlights the focus on earth/nature in this story. I like the idea that the antagonists are trying to drive the Verontos apart, as being connected to one another and their surroundings helps give them their power. I wonder who the helpful voice is - whether it's their inner selves, something in nature, or some other entity we haven't met yetBest of luck!