NovMo25: Soul Watchers

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Day 10 ended in 18024 words!

I made a pretty graph for the occasion. :)

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Here's my favorite line:

Harriet gritted her teeth. “Had anybody… died when you left?”


Oop.
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Day 11 ended with 19841 words!!! WOOOO. Definitely going to hit 20K today. :)

Adelphina bristled. “You would dare accuse me of lying?”

Damien laughed harshly. “In fact, I have accused you several times of lying! Remember? We were married just a couple hours ago!”

Adelphina blushed and shrank away.


(He is referencing a lie she made... they are not actually married!)

Another pretty graph!

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Aww! I wanted to congratulate you on staying on par! That's not easy :)
Hope the writing is going well! (Romance isn't my cup of tea, but I like court intrigues =D)
“Are you serious?”
“Completely.”
“You’re telling me that you'll get to sleep on a king-sized bed while we have to share a tiny room with two bunk beds.”
“I want to sleep on top!”
“Tommy, you’re not helping.”




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I love love love the graphs! The day you shot past the suggested word count feels good just to look at.
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Awww, thank you @Tikaya! Honestly, the more I write it, the less of a romance it is, hahaha. It's a solid fantasy novel with little bit of romance and a lot of court intrigue. Apparently, I suck at writing romances. Still, I'm having fun. :)

@Ventomology thanks!!! I adore my graphs too. Now looking back at the earlier days, they just look like little blips, but honestly at the time, it was a bit discouraging behind so behind at the very onset. So when it leaped up, it was very exciting!

OKAY. For Day 12, I actually got to 21837! Which means I'm a whole day ahead! Which is fantastic because this day is blehhhhhhhh, hahaha. (Stayed up too late with a crying baby.)

Another graph!

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And a quote...

"If you insist," Damien said, again looking at the sky.

Adelphina's gaze followed his. "Why do you keep looking up into the sky anyway?" she asked. "What is it you see? Is it shadow?"

"No shadow," Damien said. "Just a suspicion of rain."


Not sure what's gonna happen today... *tired*
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Well now you have me even more intrigued :) Hope you get to post about it soon!
“Are you serious?”
“Completely.”
“You’re telling me that you'll get to sleep on a king-sized bed while we have to share a tiny room with two bunk beds.”
“I want to sleep on top!”
“Tommy, you’re not helping.”




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I'll let you know! Though, I think at this point there are five million grammar errors and not all of it makes sense, so maybe I'll take some time to edit first, LOL.

...well! Soul Watchers is currently at 23585!!! So we are still one day ahead. Which is GOOD because I am going to be lazy for Thanksgiving, probably, haha.

The obligatory graph...

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"It'll take us two days if we keep at this rate," Damien said.

Adelphina scowled. "But we have a mule! It only took me three days to get to your town. Why should it take us two days?"

"But you were probably running the whole time and not stopping for anything," Damien pointed out. "But we can stop for whatever reason we like."

Adelphina snorted. “Such as all the graveyards we’ve stopped at so far?”

“We’ve only visited three of them so far,” Damien said.

“It’s not even noon!” Adelphina snapped.


...you can tell that the internal editor is getting numbed down, haha.
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LOLLLLLLL the cute baby kept me up until 5AM last night (AHHHHH) so my brain wasn't braining for most of the day.

I wrote 523 words yesterday for a total 24108.

...so basically it's a good thing I got so far ahead, right, because otherwise I might be panicking right now. XD

Anyway, I'll try to catch up today. I still want an extra buffer for Thanksgiving. >.>
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Okay, yesterday, the problem was that I didn't have enough *time* to write because I wanted to write a lot more than I did, since a bunch of things clicked. Still, I wrote 2931 words yesterday, for a total of 27039 words!!!! Which means I'm ahead by a day still... which, honestly??? I'll take it!

A long excerpt today, because I wrote a lot yesterday, hahaha.

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Damien gestured ahead. “Our first stop will be with one of Harriet’s friends – an elderly couple who grow hops. Their names are Monty and Doreen. I usually stay with them on the way to the capital.”

Adelphina suddenly smiled. “I suppose Harriet’s told them not to give you alcohol under any circumstance?”

Damien blushed, but he laughed anyway. “They sneak some to me anyway,” giving her a wink. “They own a hops farm, after all! But they don’t let me get drunk. Anyway, Harriet has told them we’re traveling on our honeymoon, so just pretend that you like me and ask them questions about their lives, and that will satisfy them. They’ll love telling you all their stories. Just act interested, that’s all. As long as you get them talking about their stories, they won’t pry into yours. In fact, the trouble is getting them to stop talking.”

Adelphina stiffened. “And they’ll give us our own room?”

“Don’t worry, I’ll sleep on the floor,” Damien said with a chuckle, glancing at her face. “You have no reason to distrust me! Just, pretend you like me when we wake up. That’s all I ask. And, if you’re feeling exceptionally generous, maybe offer to rub my sore back in front of them so to keep up appearances. That will help us seem like we’re married, I think.”

“I’ll think about it,” Adelphina said, gritting her teeth. Then she frowned at Damien. “Is there anything I need to know about you, now that we’re pretending to be married?”

Damien cringed. “Harriet told you most of my story, I’m afraid. Other than that, I’m afraid I’m not very interesting.”

Adelphina eyed him strangely. “I doubt that.” She paused. “Your family threw you out because you were a soul watcher?”

Damien suddenly shifted uncomfortably. “I don’t really talk about that,” he said. “I don’t think you’ll need to bring that up with anyone in polite conversation. It doesn’t really matter. Besides, it’s not a very interesting story.”

“I’m interested.” When Damien only winced and looked away, Adelphina pursed her lips. “How old were you when they threw you out?”

“Twelve,” he said. “At least, that’s the age when I started seeing shadows. I always saw radiance, but I thought that was just a normal thing that everyone did. And my eyes are so dark anyway, no one really noticed since they never dilated fully. But when my grandfather died, I saw him sit next to me at the funeral. And when my family saw how dark my eyes had gotten, grandma yelled at me for being cursed and my family threw me out. At first, I thought I was only barred from the funeral, so I went home. But when they came back home, they told me that they never wanted to see me again and that I was dead to them. So, I left.”

Adelphina flinched. “That’s what happened?”

Again, Damien shifted nervously. “Well, that’s not all that happened. My mother made me a sandwich before I left. But yes, essentially. That’s what happened.”

Adelphina shuddered. “Have they ever tried to contact you again?”

“Only once,” Damien admitted. “When I was arrested, the sheriff had me send them a letter for bail, and asked if they would be interested in settling my debts for me. They responded that I wasn’t their son anymore and they did not want me to contact them again. So I didn’t.” He swallowed hard. “I don’t wish them ill,” he said quickly. “I understand. Nobody wants a soul watcher as a son. It’s hard enough to constantly have to disappoint Harriet. I’m glad I don’t have to disappoint them either. I just wish things were different.”

Adelphina bit her lip and thought of her father. “My father sent me away too,” she murmured. “Though, nothing as dramatic as that. He sent me away to the Corvin family, since they were the court soul watchers, and the family was renowned for not falling into shadow. He hoped that I might learn their secrets so I wouldn’t fall into shadow either.”

“That’s kind of him,” Damien said distractedly.

“I was really angry with him at first though,” Adelphina admitted. “I didn’t like that he separated me from my sister. Then, the Corvins were nice, but they didn’t know what to do with me at all, since I wasn’t nearly powerful enough for them to train, yet they had to take care of me nonetheless. If it weren’t for Lucian’s friendship, I might have gone insane.”

Damien glanced at her hand and Adelphina realized that he was looking at her ring. “You are close to Lucian?”

Adelphina nodded.

Damien frowned. “Is he really just a friend?”

Adelphina stared at her ring. “I’m not sure anymore,” she admitted, touching its stone. “Though, I’m not sure of anything anymore.”

“You’ll get your footing soon,” Damien said, watching her kindly. “You’re a clever one. That marriage lie was well done. I completely believed you! And now that you’re cloaked in shadows, you’ll be even more well hidden. Then we’ll find out what’s going on and hopefully restore you to your home safely.”

His tone was gentle and kind and Adelphina smiled in spite of herself. “And then what will you do once I’m restored to my home?’

Damien tried to smile. “What I do best, of course. Disappear into the shadows. That way, I don’t have to disappoint you more than I have to.”

Adelphina’s smile faltered. When her face fell, Damien suddenly flushed, embarrassed.

“There’s one more thing you should know, probably, so it doesn’t startle you,” he muttered, looking away from her. “Sometimes I cry when I sleep.”

Adelphina frowned. “You cry?”

Damien nodded, growing redder, then added, “I’m sorry – I assure you, it’s not intentional! Anyway, if that happens, just kick me so I roll over, and I’ll probably stop. Or, if I don’t stop, you can just wake me up. I don’t care.”

“I’ll keep that in mind,” Adelphina said gently, nodding to Damien when she realized he was watching her anxiously.

A slow smile crawled onto Damien’s face. “Thanks, Della.”


Damien has the self-confidence of a broken stick, hahahaha. (But I loooooove him anyway because he's a sweetie, even if he occasionally assembles shadow armies, hahaha.)

Anyway, today's scene is going to be a happy scene where Adelphina meets Monty and Doreen, who are genuinely lovely people who are sooooo happy for Damien for marrying and are super sweet to Adelphina and are such a green-flag couple that both Adelphina and Damien feel slightly guilty that the marriage is a complete fraud, hahaha. Also, Adelphina gets to hear people gush about Damien, which makes her intrigued because before now, because most men she knows gush about themselves more than other people gush about them, but Damien is the opposite -- the more she finds out about him, the more she finds out how many people truly like him. And like... he pretty much dropped everything to help her. So yes. Intrigued.

Oh, because you want the graph...

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...okay! So I wrote 3176 words yesterday for a total of 30215 words, which means I am OFFICIALLY ahead by more than a day! Very exciting. I feel slightly relieved about my Thanksgiving prospects. :)

Just this line for today, though clearly I am excited about it all. XD

Damien gave an apologetic smile. “Was it that obvious?”


I AM SO EXCITED FOR TODAY'S WRITING. I get to write a surprise party!!!! It's going to be epic, hahahahaha. And slightly disastrous, if I'm honest, but you know how much I love to write party scenes, so really is that much of a surprise? XD

Also, I know you're not supposed to edit, but I want to add another scene to yesterday's writing which will be *chef's kiss*

...oh, and here's the graph!

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The Cloudfare outage made me not post yesterday, lol. BUT. Fortunately I still have my stats saved! :D

Day 17 was INCREDIBLE. I wrote 3347 words and the only reason why I only wrote that little was because I couldn't write more. But the words flowed and life was good and I was soooo excited!

Day 18 was... less than incredible, hahaha. I wrote 1595 words while hating my life and fell asleep before I could do the full 1667 words that I wanted to do. Most of the words was me redoing a section because I apparently didn't stick the landing for the chapter I'm currently working on now, which helped contribute in the feeling of failure. However, it's making the story feel better now, so hopefully it works out in the end.

Currently, the novel is at 35157 words... which, honestly, I'll take it! My plan is to keep writing the usual daily 1667 words so I don't get behind... at least until Thanksgiving break. I've built up a nice lead, which will help me relax during Thanksgiving. :) So, if I don't write at all during my Thanksgiving trip (unlikely, tbh... I'll probably write something while I'm nursing ze cute baby, hahaha) I won't be too behind.

Anyway! Today's goal is to finish this chapter, where Princess Adelphina succeeds in playing a bad actress who is playing Princess Adelphina... and yes, this story is absurd, hahaha.

Excerpt from the last couple days:

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Nancy laughed. “I wondered! I was afraid Harriet would claim you forever. I am glad you finally escaped” She raised her glass. “To freedom!”

But Damien only laughed. “Freedom? Why, I just got married! I would hardly call that freedom. Besides, I'm not free of Harriet yet! I still have to pay off my debts!”

Nancy suddenly frowned. “She didn’t clear your debts as a wedding present?”

Damien shook his head, then smiled and leaned forward. “Still, that’s okay! Because we thought of an even better way to pay them off.” Then he laughed and pointed to Adelphina. “Behold, the lost princess!”

Adelphina was so surprised, she only stared at him. But Nancy’s eyes widened. “Lost princess? What are you going on about?”

Damien laughed. “See? It’s perfect! Her name is Della. And the princess’s name is Dellina–”

“Adelphina,” Nancy corrected.

Damien snorted and took another drink. “Whatever. The point is, it’s close enough. And look how pretty she is! She’s pretty enough that she can pretend to be the lost princess. All she needs to do is look pretty and maybe curtsy once or twice. Then we’ll get the reward, I’ll pay back Harriet’s debts, and we can all live happily ever after!”

Nancy suddenly looked annoyed. “You can’t be serious. Do you really think that girl can pass off as a princess?”

“Of course she can!” Damien said. He pointed to Adelphina as if she were a dog. “Come on! Do that curtsy thing Harriet showed you now, love.”

Adelphina recognized the lie at once and realized Damien was only testing their new cover story. Still, she couldn’t help but feel overwhelmed. She stood up, wondering whether she should try to make a good curtsy or a bad curtsy, decided to make a good one, only to stumble forward when she dipped down. “Maybe when I’m not so tipsy,” she said, hiccuping. “I’m not very good with alcohol.”

Nancy snorted and raised her eyebrow. “And you think you can pass off her as the princess?”


Also, graph! Isn't it beautiful???

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AHHHHH I SAT DOWN TO FINISH MY WORD COUNT LATE LAST NIGHT AFTER A BUSY DAY AND THEN I HEARD SOMEONE VOMIT. >.>

Anyway. So I ended up only writing 1003 words yesterday and my lead I worked hard to build up is DWINDLING. Though it's still fortunately sizeable? I have 36160 words. So really, I shouldn't complain, but AHHHH I AM GOING TO COMPLAIN.

Anyway.

“Della?” he asked, moving to get off, then winced when he moved too far.

“You rest,” Adelphina said sternly. “You’re drunk.”

“I’m not drunk,” Damien muttered, his words slurring together. “I just can’t stand up by myself. But if you helped me up…”


EDIT: OH. Btw, I am definitely finishing the chapter today. Spoilered is spoilers...

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Next on the list:

- Start new chapter! Going to the palace after Adelphina and Damien eat a little cake and regroup.

- PALACE. Things seem... wrong and Adelphina is very wary. Also! First meeting with Lucian.

- Damien is kidnapped.

- Enter: Lucian. Again.

(That's my current thoughts anyway, but EVERYTHING IS SUBJECT TO CHANGE.)
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Finished chapter yesterday! So wrote 2212, for a total of 38372 words! Started new chapter! THEY'RE ABOUT TO GO TO THE PALACE!!! AHHHHHHH!!!!!

So I guess this means I'm less than 12k words from winning? The finish line is in sight!

Anyway. I haven't written anything today yet... probably should. XD
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I'VE PASSED THE 40K MARK!!!!!!

LESS THAN 10K TO WRITE!!!!!!!!!!

If you want the exact numbers, I wrote 1840 words for a total of 40212!!!

Yesterday I found a major plot hole (whoooooops lol) which requires a little bit of writing so I think I might plug it up??? Also, SHE'S ABOUT TO ENTER THE PALACE! It is very exciting! So that's the flavor of the day.

“It’s still a bit odd to see everyone out here.”

“Oh, stop being so downbeat on it. At least the line is moving quickly.” Then he nodded to Adelphina. “By the way, your bodice is slipping open again.”

Adelphina swore. “Is it?”

Damien suddenly laughed. “Careful, princess! I don’t think those are very regal words coming from your lips.”


*flails*

Edit... GRAPH!!
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I have 42K EXACTLY!

Also: she entered the palace!!! DHSAKHAKSHDADSS.

Honestly, I'm very excited, but I am also veyr grumpy because in my head, this scene is so funny, but there's a bunch of comedy slapstick going on, and I feel like I'm not capturing it very well??? Of course, this is the problem for editing later so I am trying not to think too hard about it, but...

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Frantically, she wondered what she could do if Lucian were to come in. But before she could think of a plan, a half dozen waiters came in, carrying glasses full of sparkling wine, and began to offer it to the girls.

Adelphina froze.

Again, she thought back at the chaotic ball – the disaster had started with poisoned punch. And, while she had drank reluctantly with Damien for their wedding party with Nancy, she was still nervous about drinking anything in the palace, especially when she had no idea where she stood with the court.

Though, even if she drank it, it would still not be a good idea. After all, what if her eyes turned black with alcohol? Perhaps it was another stupid test!

Still, if she was nervous about drinking, she was the only one. The other girls took the glasses easily and downed them, commenting with each other about the wine. They made such a big fuss that Adelphina drew back, hopeful that she could escape their notice without taking any of the wine. But then, as she leaned back on a wall, a waiter popped up, holding up a silver tray. When he saw her blinking at him, he grinned.

“Your highness,” he said, offering her his tray. “Won’t you take a glass?”

“Thanks,” she said with a weak smile, taking the last glass on the tray. When he looked at her expectantly, waiting for her to drink it, she raised it, as if to offer a toast, then went to sit down next to Actress, only to purposely trip when Actress rose up, grumpy that Adelphina had dared to invade her personal space. The glass splashed all over Adelphina’s dress.

“Whoops,” Adelphina said. “Guess I couldn’t hold my alcohol.”


See??? It's there, but like. I dunno. It's not as hysterical as it should be, lol.

NEXT DRAFT. >.>

Anyway!!!! *flails*

I'm still like... three days ahead so yay??? But also, LUCIAN IS ABOUT TO COME IN. So I am very excited!!! But also there's a stomach bug going around so lolololol I think I'm going to make it but also WHO KNOWS.
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