a piece of toast reviews your short stories

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So, I realized that I have been REALLY slacking in the review department recently. I will review short stories and/or poems if you want. I am willing to review serieses (is that the plural form? english is a functional language..) if they are like only 2~3 chapters out so far but I will start chronologically. Also, I'm not the best reviewer but I will be trying to provide criticism where I can.

You can also request how burnt you want your review to be:
No request: it means I will review based on how I feel during the day, and how I feel about the piece.
Raw bread: Super nice and fluffy type of writing.
Burnt to ashes bread: I will be mean >:( (jkjk, i'll still try to be positive)
You can request from anywhere in this spectrum (for example, a mildly toasted bread with the crunch of a golden brown fry is perfectly valid and I will try to match your tone despite not knowing what that even entails.)
The world needs more sparkles




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Hello! I have a lot of poetry in my portfolio. You're welcome to review as many as you'd like! I've already gotten feedback on most/all of them, but more is great too.




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I would really appreciate a review on either of my short stories, I am new here and have not gotten any yet. Tysm!!!




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