Reviews by Ocean ⋆.ೃ࿔*:・

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Hi! I'm Ocean and I write reviews! ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ✩‧˚
I'll review short stories and novels! Sadly I will not do poetry because I suck at it (sorry poets) ˚₊· ͟͟͞͞➳❥
I like teen fiction alot! ✧・゚: *✧・゚:*
I'll try to get to everybody and if you have any questions let me know ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊωˋ )ଓ⁾⁾
If the world was ending, I think I would grab some Cinnamon Toast Crunch, a bunch of water, and I'd probably just... I'd probably go crazy.- Tyler, The Creator




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Hey there, I have checked a few of your reviews and they are pretty cool. I was wondering if you could review the first arc of my WIP novel called Nine - it's a bit long, so it might be a bit tedious - so heads-up for that. It would be great if you could write a short review in each chapter and then write a long review at the end - or you can do it however you like, it's your choice. Sorry if this comes as a bit pushy. The following are the links to the first and the last chapters for your convenience.

It's a Boring World [Ch. I, Nine]
Love, Hate and 69 [Ch. IX, Nine] - Part II

Signing off,
The Rebel
Yes, to dance beneath the diamond skies with one hand waving free,
Silhouetted by the trees, circled by the circus sands --
With all memories and fate, driven deep beneath the waves,
Let me forget about today until tomorrow...




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Hi! I have a story I've been posting that I'd like you to review, if you want. It's fantasy, but the protagonist is a teen, so I guess that counts as teen fiction. :)

You can feel free to review as much or as little as you like. It's intended to be a novel, so it's posted in segments by chapter/parts of a chapter on my portfolio, under the title To Paxaria. (I'd include a link, but I still don't know how to do that here?? Can someone tell me how?? I've been around a hot minute, but I haven't figured this out hahaha)

Thanks in advance!




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also sorry I didn't review y'all's work :)
If the world was ending, I think I would grab some Cinnamon Toast Crunch, a bunch of water, and I'd probably just... I'd probably go crazy.- Tyler, The Creator




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u still up for this or do you wish to close your thread? :)



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