NovMo '24: ✴ The Last Arcana ✴

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NovMo Day 3


  • Chapter 3 WC: 1,935
  • Total WC: 4,332
  • Today's chapter was from Jarvis' point of view. They split off from the rest of the hornets to find allies together, and I slowly think their romance is blossoming! They're so cute together. I can't wait to see where this goes.
  • Not sure who I want to write for next chapter, but I'm thinking Elara. She's extremely resourceful and I have a feeling writing for her will be more fun then I think!

Snippet from today, I finally introduced Thorne, a seasoned information broker with ties to the Syndicate. He's gonna be my "go to guy" when my charries need any help XD

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If we could secure allies and gather intel from someone in the Syndicate, it would strengthen our position against the UTA.

Suddenly, the cloaked figure's voice rose above the bustle of the tavern, "The shipment is vulnerable, but we need to be cautious. The Enforcers are on high alert. If we're going to make a move, we have to strike quickly and decisively."

"Did you hear that?" I whispered, "He knows about the shipment."

Zeyna nodded, "We have to approach him. We can't miss this opportunity."
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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NovMo Day 4


  • Chapter 4 WC: 2,885
  • Total WC: 7,217
  • Today, my characters made a major breakthrough! They connected with Kian, Zeyna's brother. Kian's character is so layered. He presents himself as a rogue operative, but there's an underlying complexity to him in the fact that he also works for Chronos. ahhh
  • Next chapter will probably be from Zeyna's point of view. I need to give that girl some more love and screentime!

No snippet today because it was all just 'prepare for ambush' stuff. :D
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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Day 5,6,7, and 8


  • Chapter 5, 6, and 7 WC: 5,122
  • Total WC: 12,339
  • Okay, so with the election happening and getting slightly sick, I had to take a day off-- setting me back. But, I still managed to write the past day or so, and I'm so proud of actually pulling off 5k words to make up for the days I missed. XD
  • These chapters were pretty easy to write. They finally infiltrated the package that they were seeking, so we're getting somewhere! I kind of need to do a /bit/ more worldbuilding for some plot holes that I've found, but that's fine. Easy fix.
  • I also need to develop a few more characters, because I have some evil plans for later chapters. hehe.

Snippet from Elara's chapter! Shows a bit of her personality.

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As the moments stretched into what felt like an eternity, I thought back to our earlier conversation with Kian. Could we truly trust him? The unease nestled in my stomach. I was accustomed to the intricacies of diplomacy, but this felt different. We couldn't just go around trusting anyone. We had to be vigilant; professional.

Well, just about as professional as we could be considering our place in society.

The communicator suddenly flickered. I didn't hesitate to activate it, "This is Elara," I said, my voice low and cautious.
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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Yay! Honestly, you're doing great, lol. Election day got me waaay too behind, so this is inspirational. :)
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Thank you, Snoink! :3


NovMo Day 9,10,11 and 12


  • Chapter 8,9,10 and 11 WC: 7,209
  • Total WC: 19,548
  • It's easier for me to check in every few days, so that's what I'll be doing from now on. I've been writing a bit every day and organized the chapters in another document so that I can reference the different POVs when needed, which has helped with pacing a lot.
  • I also wanted to say I'm just as interested in this story as I was when I was worldbuilding-- I tend to get bored halfway through a story and I'm so glad I'm just falling more and more in love with the plot. :3
  • I've expanded even more on the Jarvis + Zeyna love arc that I was planning, and they're so cute. Zeyna is so serious and Jarvis is just a goofball. I love them!
  • In the story right now, they're looking for resources out in Frostmarch. Its only right, since the cold weather is approaching! Gotta secure all the vibes.

Cute snippet from Zeyna's POV:

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He raised an eyebrow, leaning back slightly, "What, you mean Jarvis, the guy who fixes things, makes gadgets, and saves everyone's asses when their plans go wrong?"

"Exactly," My grin widened, "I'm just checking if you're still human under all that genius. You've been at this for hours."

Jarvis chuckled, wiping a smudge of grease from his hands before turning to me, "I'm a lot of things, but 'human' is debatable after all these years," He tilted his head toward me, "What about you? How are you holding up?"

I shrugged, looking away for a moment, "I'm fine. I've had worse. But... I guess I'm just thinking about what's coming. We're about to take a huge risk, and I can't help but wonder if I'm ready for it."
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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NovMo Day 13 - 23


  • Chapter 12-17 WC: 12,966
  • Total WC: 32,514
  • I know I said I was going to check in less often but I didn't mean every 10 days, so my bad XD Okay, so, I've written a total of 6 chapters, and I've flipped through multiple POVs. We're now 25% through the story! yay!
  • I introduced a possible love interest for Echo, a lovely young lady named Aela who's part of the Syndicate. Don't know if I'm gonna follow through with that though.
  • After them getting busted a couple times by the UTA, the group decided to head to Faymora and meet with the Syndicate to group up. I love the progression of the plot so far! Plus, new scenery!

There may be a few swear words in these snippets so view at your own discretion XD

A snippet from one of Aisling's chapters:
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I adjusted the two shadow blades at my waist, the familiar weight comforting in my hands. They were always my first line of defense.

But before I could take another step, the sounds of footsteps echoed through the alley, sharp and deliberate. They weren't just regular patrols. I glanced at Zeyna. She caught my eye and stiffened.

Shit.

"They know," I muttered, my heart pounding harder. The UTA had been tipped off. The Enforcers were closing in.

"Stay low," Zeyna ordered, and we instinctively melted into the shadows.

I was already slipping through the darkened alley, my senses heightened. My magic was at the ready. I could feel the pull of the shadows, the familiar warmth of my power running through me. But there was no time for it yet. I needed to move quickly, silently.

I pulled my braid tighter as I darted through the maze of narrow streets, trying to get a better vantage point. My eyes flicked over every corner, every moving shadow, until I saw them: Enforcers. Not just one or two, but a full squad, weapons drawn, moving with precision as they took up positions around the Old Quarter. They were waiting for us.

Zeyna's voice crackled through the comms, "Aisling, what do you see?"

I stayed low, crouched behind a pile of crates, "They're not just patrolling--they're positioned. They've been tipped off."


I also really love this quote from Chapter 15 because its so Zeyna coded. XDD
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"Let's go," I said, grinning, "We've got a war to start."


Snippet from one of Jarvis' chapters. I also love him because he's such a sweetheart. He's like the dad of the group :3
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Aisling had barely escaped unscathed--her eyes distant. She had lost more than just a partner once. This time, I could see it in her face. The cost of all this was starting to show, and I couldn't help but feel responsible. If I had pushed for a safer plan, maybe--just maybe--things wouldn't have gone so terribly wrong.

"Aisling?" I called over my shoulder, though I knew she wouldn't respond. She hadn't said much since we regrouped. "You good?"

I heard her shuffle behind me, the scrape of her boots on the floor as she crossed the room to sit by the table, her eyes never meeting mine, "I'm fine," she muttered, the words flat.

I didn't believe her. But I didn't press. Not tonight.


An interaction between the Syndicate Leader and Aisling that I love (from Jarvis' POV):
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Aisling shifted slightly beside me, her voice a low whisper, "Respect is a fine currency, but it doesn't buy loyalty."

The leader nodded slowly, "True. But in time, loyalty can be earned."
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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NovMo Day 24-26


  • Chapter 18-20 WC: 8,752
  • Total WC: 41,266
  • I'm so relieved and happy because I finally reached my goal! I honestly didn't think that I'd be able to do it-- but I fell in love with the story and the characters and ahhh. I might take a break for a bit because my brain is absolutely fried. It might be healthy to work on another project for a bit. Maybe then, I'll also get some new inspiration :3
  • We haven't really budged much plot-wise since my last entry here, we're still in Syndicate territory and I'm really enjoying the character interactions so far. I may be getting a little carried away with dialogue so maybe a good description scene would be nice. Something like that. Faymora is the most beautiful city, nevertheless.
  • Also, Echo is officially my favorite character (this will most likely change by the time I'm a few chapters further XD)

The one description scene I'm pretty proud of, from Echo's POV. Like I said above, Faymora is so gorgeous in my eyes!
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We had been given temporary quarters in the outer branches of the city, where homes were carved from living trees. The space was larger than I expected, the walls alive with trailing vines and flowers that opened and closed as we moved past them. It was peaceful, but my nerves wouldn't let me relax.

The Syndicate's leader, Xanthe, had granted us access but not trust. That was clear from the way the others watched us. We were outsiders here, and it would take more than words to prove our worth.

I stood at the balcony of our quarters, staring out at the shimmering lights of the city. The jungle stretched endlessly. In the distance, I could see figures moving along the bridges and pathways that connected the city's towering trees. Faymora never seemed to sleep.


A little dialogue snippet from Aisling's POV-- new bestfriend vibes maybe? I feel like her and Kaelina are similar in some aspects :P
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Kaelina chuckled, "Sharp. I like that. No, I'm not here to interrogate you--if that's what you're thinking. Just... curious. We've heard a lot about the Hornets, but stories don't always line up with reality."

"And what do the stories say?"

She didn't hesitate, "That you're rebels with a cause. Fighters. Survivors. People who don't know when to quit." She tilted her head, "But I'm more interested in what you say about yourselves."

I hesitated. Kaelina didn't strike me as someone who'd turn on us, but trust wasn't something I handed out freely. Still, there was something disarming about her, the way she spoke like she already knew the answers but wanted to hear them from me.
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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