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OrabellaAvenue · 2023-07-23T01:45:31Z

Temporarily closed for refurbishment If you're still waiting on a review, don't worry! I'm still working on it! Those will be delivered as soon as possible. :D Meet the bunnies: https://idausa.lattecdn.com//assets/components/phpthumbof/cache/blogmain-group-of-rabbits-2056157612-0922-source-shutterstock.35512797ebb051c5a56769bf5c81c2f2.jpg *DISCLAIMER* I do not own this picture. Nor the bunnies (unfortunately). These bunnies are Story Bunnies, and they love reviewing! What do they review? Well, anything! Before you browse through their humble shop, please read their following rules: 1) Because of their sensitive and caring nature, they will not read works with 16 or 18+ rating. 2) Absolutely no s*xual content. No exceptions. 3) Many romantic things will also not be read and reviewed. 4) Subjects that are otherwise unsuitable are also not accepted for review. There may be some exceptions. For example, it is entirely fine if the story is a love letter to someone, as long as it is suitable for a younger teen (or bunny) to read. If you're not sure if your work follows the rules, give the reason as to why you think so. Your work may or may not receive a review. However, the bunnies do review: 1) Poems a) Poems about bunnies 2) Short Stories 3) Novel Chapters (If it is very far along in the story and you want a specific chapter reviewed, it might take quite a while for the bunnies to read) 4) Works that are long (length does not matter to them; although longer works will take longer to review) 5) Pretty much anything that does not violate their rules. On to the products! Classic Willow Wood Toy A default review. Nothing special. No set length. The bunnies will review whatever they find fit in your work. They can usually dig up a lot. Cinnamon Bun A lengthy and comprehensive review with many quotes detailing where each piece of advice is needed. This may take longer than others to ship to your house(literary work). Bunny Doll A light and positive review. With little to no constructive criticism, this focuses on what was great about the writing rather than dwelling on what could've been improved on. Dandelion Treat A short review, but one that focuses on a specific aspect (or two or three) of your choice. (Maybe you don't care for a lengthy review, but you want to know if your plot is interesting. Or a lot of other reviewers have commented on your setting, but you want to know if your characters are realistic.) Custom Order Nothing is quite what you wanted? Maybe you would've liked the YWS Critique Sandwich better. Or it simply isn't what you were hoping for. Design your own review the way you want it! Fluffle A fluffle is a group of bunnies. Here, you can combine multiple orders. (Maybe you want it to be light and sweet, but also lengthy. So, a Bunny Doll holding a Cinnamon Bun!) Add ons 10 to the power of 7 Keychain 10^7 is approximately the population of domesticated (or pet) bunnies! But this doesn't even include wild rabbits. If you want a rating of something, this is where the bunnies will get out their numbers. (1 to 10, how good is the writing quality? 1 to 100, how interesting is my character?) Question Pillows Want a specific question answered? Like the Dandelion Treat, our bunnies will seek out specific help throughout your work and find out what you wanted to know with our secret power: a different perspective! The cute little bunnies require nothing in return except for love and affection. 🐇That's all from the reviewing bunnies.🐇 If you'd like to place an order, reply to the thread! They'd also like to remind you to keep writing!

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Sat Apr 27, 2024 5:46 am

OrabellaAvenue says... · Sat Apr 27, 2024 5:46 am

Woops, sorry, @Fishr
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Sat Apr 27, 2024 11:59 am

Fishr says... · Sat Apr 27, 2024 11:59 am

Thank you!

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