Gengar Does Reviews!

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Howdy hey! Gengar here! Do you want someone to review your work? Most likely, since you clicked on this thread. I wanna try to improve my reviewing skills, and what better way to do that than reviewing stuff?

What are my reviews like?

My reviews are usually more commentary based. I usually try to break it up into three sections: things I like, my interpretation of the work, and things I think could be improved on. My reviews are usually kind of short, but I’m going to try to make them a little longer for this.

I will review:

—Short stories
—Poems
—All genres (although I may not be as good with romance stories)
—pretty much anything not in the list below

I Won’t review

—Novels/chapters (unless it’s the first chapter)
—Fanfiction (unless I know the fandom)
—Really, really long stories
—articles/essays
—18+ works, or works with graphic violence / gore

I’m not looking for anything in return. Please keep in mind that I may not review stuff immediately.
Last edited by GengarTheGhost on Fri Mar 22, 2024 7:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hi there Gengar! I noticed you were looking for reviews, so I thought I might as well drop by, as I actually have something for once in need of review.

I just wrote this poem here and was hoping for some critique on it.

Thanks!
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Hey! If you wish to review something, I have a poem I recently published here:https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/FireCrispyWriting/Id-Like-to-Speak-to-the-Writer-of-My-Life-157497




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Sure thing! I’ll get it done soon :D
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Hey Gengar!
I really, really need input on my writing (since I'm kind of a newbie). I only wrote one poem, and it would be great if you could tell me what you think about it. By the way, I am all for constructive criticism, and take everything with a grain of salt, in other words, you can insult my writing if necessary. Thanks in advance!
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@Inferno hey inferno! I'm not sure if you saw the closed tag on this thread, but I'm not currently looking for reviews bc I'm kinda busy with life. If I have the time I may do it but if you might wanna check with other YWSers first. I hope you understand <333
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OH MY GOSH! I'm sorry! Yes, I understand. Sorry sorry sorry! I didn't see the closed thingy. SO Sorry.
Time flies like an arrow; fruit flies like a banana.

Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel has been turned off. Sorry for the inconvenience.


WAIT.
Spoiler
theydon'tloveyoulikeiloveyou-



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