A School Of Corrupted Ones (OOC)

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i haven't come up with any teachers, the school basically looks like a castle




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My character’s been submitted! ^^
mint, she/her


.--. / ... ...- -.-. .-.. / - .--. ..- .- / .--- --- ...- .--- / .--- --- .--. .-- / .--. .--- .-.. / .--- -.-- .-.. .... -
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What those C20, C21, etc. mean?
"People say they need freedom, but in fact, nobody wants freedom."
- akutagawa ryunosuke


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used to be loveissourgrapes




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ohh, interesting! i'll make a character c:
"People say they need freedom, but in fact, nobody wants freedom."
- akutagawa ryunosuke


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Hey @NothingMore905! So sorry, but I actually think I might be a bit too busy to join this right now! It looks like a lot of fun though and I’ll keep a watch on everyone’s progress! You’ve got this!
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winter can usually be found wherever Leya is = another fun fact ~Leya
Winter you just have a whole cinematic universe in your head ~Wist
winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa




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Hey NothingMore905, I've noticed that the responses you have posted on the RP are very short and dry, sometimes consisting of only a few words. It's making it kind of hard to write anything new...I don't know anything about Ai other than her schedule, her dorm room, and how she likes to paint and sculpt. I don't even know what she thinks of Melody. Does she like her? Does she think she's weird? It's impossible to tell.
Your responses are very concise, but they don't tell much about the characters, the setting, anything. It would be nice if you added some more development, it's starting to feel like you don't even want to be part of the RP, even though you created it.
All this to say; I think the concept is really cool and I want to build more on it! It's very creative and honestly not something I think I would have come up with on my own. We should keep it going!




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sorry they're a bit short, but when someone else puts long paragraphs like that, it makes it a bit confusing for me but i will try to make them longer




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i edited my response a bit, i hope thats long enough since i couldn't come up with any other ideas TwT




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I read it, well done! It's very good, thank you! ^-^




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Lol, not autocorrect trying to change Dads to Dad's TwT




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