Two Crows Watch from the Gallows Tree (part 14)

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Jerica narrowed her eyes slightly. “I see.” She’d need to make sure she told Derik that Ash’s soldiers weren’t happy. That was important.

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She studied her. "What are you looking at?"
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Jerica shrugged, glancing down at her bread as she took another bite. Best not to force the issue. Unless— “Just trying to get a feel for the sort of environment Ash keeps here.”

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"Yeah, well, that's not really your business."
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“Actually, it’s very much my business.” She straightened slightly, swallowing. “We could have just sent a letter if we didn’t care about knowing what sort of man we were forming a partnership with.”

(I am poking around on copying over thread one to a Google Doc (I’ve been super bad at being consistent with it and haven’t done much) but I just copied over the first 70 pages of thread one. Would you like to take a stab at the word count?)

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(I'm not sure I can do that tonight but perhaps tomorrow?)

The soldier stiffened and tilted her chin up. "Lord Ash is a good man and a good employer. Just because I don't enjoy my job doesn't mean he's not a good person."
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(Oh, no, I just meant take a guess of how many words we’ve written not do any of it haha we have broken 6 figures and I am proud of us. Roughly 102k words in the first 70 pages of thread one)

Jerica looked at her for a moment and inclined her head. “Fair enough.”

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She nodded. "Fair enough indeed."
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Jerica decided to take another bite of her bread. She was almost done now. But she wasn’t used to people being this prickly with her. Most people were afraid of her; had her infamy not spread to the North?

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(HA you fool you are in the North now where people are either icily polite or very grumpy)

"What sort of training do you have down south?"
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“All sorts.” Jerica shrugged. “Swords. Bows. Horseback. Those are the most common. But we’ve got axes, maces, spears, staffs. Everything, really.”

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"Good, good." She nodded. "Us too."
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“Nice.” Jerica nodded. “What’s your preferred format?”

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"Double battleaxes."
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“Nice.” Jerica nodded, finishing off her bread.

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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