Ok - The main thing that strikes me from all of you work is the shortness, from this I can only infer the pacing. I dont believe you know where you are going with this do you?
Sit down and map out your characters, plot and world where it is taking place, form another plot from this and stick to it. You could benifit from plotting.
That's ecacitaly what I plan to do. But I'm waiting for my creativity to return.........For some reason I have MAJOR writters block! I've listened to all of my music, looked at a bunch of art.....but nothing helps! So far I have 3 storys on my desk top that are going no were, two fantesy's and one real life..........
God made us Best friends because he knew our moms couldn't handle us as sisters.....
