looseleaf wants to review

Memento Mori
This please, loose leaf.
Thank you!

Sorry for the late response, @Fishr, but I'll try to get to it this weekend! (poke me on Monday if I haven't done it yet :)))

Thank you!

Hi, I would love it if you could help me out with a review on my short story Hypoxia. It's been a while since I've written in this medium so I'm trying to shake the rust off and feedback really helps. Thanks in advance

looseleaf wrote:Sorry for the late response, @Fishr, but I'll try to get to it this weekend! (poke me on Monday if I haven't done it yet ))

Heh. So. I did some editing, and now I’m not sure if it is qualified as a short story anymore. But if you want to give it a go, I’m most interested in character development.
Memento Mori

Entropy

Plz review!

I would appreciate your thoughts on my short story A Warm Embrace!
A Warm Embrace

hiya! No idea if this is still open, but if it is, I'd love if you'd review the opening chapter to my novel: Wakefield, Wyoming. 1941.
As of typing, there's zero reviews and there's only a slight reference to blood and such, so hopefully that falls in line with your requirements.
Thanks for considering!

Hi Looseleaf!! If you have the time, I'd really appreciate a review of my new poem. Just so you know, it is centering around politics, but it's nothing detailed just a reflection. Here's the link!!

A Country of Red and Blue

Hey there, looseleaf! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

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