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Ljungtroll
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 1:09 am
Ljungtroll says... · Tue Sep 08, 2020 1:09 am
Thanks, guys! Sorry for the late reply. @Stringbean, have you got anything (particularly poetry) that you'd like me to review right now?
"The Imperial need for control is so desperate because it is so unnatural. Tyranny requires constant effort. It breaks, it leaks. Authority is brittle. Oppression is the mask of fear. Remember that." -Karis Nemik

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Stringbean
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 2:08 am
Stringbean says... · Tue Sep 08, 2020 2:08 am
RavenLord wrote:Thanks, guys! Sorry for the late reply. @Stringbean, have you got anything (particularly poetry) that you'd like me to review right now?

No worries!

I have a few poems in my portfolio, you're welcome to take a crack at whatever looks interesting! I've got another that I'm ready to post too, I think, once I get some more points.
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Ljungtroll
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 2:12 am
Ljungtroll says... · Tue Sep 08, 2020 2:12 am
Sweet. I'll take a look tomorrow when I'm back on the computer!
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Riverlight
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 4:48 pm
Riverlight says... · Tue Sep 08, 2020 4:48 pm
Here's another if you have the time--

Two Lovers Far Apart
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Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:10 pm
Riverlight says... · Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:10 pm
Vil wrote:Here's another if you have the time--

Two Lovers Far Apart

Psst... @RavenLord...
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Ljungtroll
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Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:19 pm
Ljungtroll says... · Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:19 pm
Oh crap I forgot. I'll get to it when I can, Vil. I've got a lot of school stuff right now and I'm not as free as I've been. Sorry! I'll see what I can do.
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Riverlight
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Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:22 pm
Riverlight says... · Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:22 pm
Oh, ok! Sorry, take your time!!! <3
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Mon Oct 12, 2020 1:26 pm
Ljungtroll says... · Mon Oct 12, 2020 1:26 pm
This is a spot for reviews, buddy. Please advertise elsewhere.
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omer
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:23 pm
omer says... · Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:23 pm
Hey Raven! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link:
Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
Last edited by omer on Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Ljungtroll
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:35 pm
Ljungtroll says... · Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:35 pm
This is my review corner, @omer. I'll see if I can take a look anyway. Vil's area is Vil's Reviews
"The Imperial need for control is so desperate because it is so unnatural. Tyranny requires constant effort. It breaks, it leaks. Authority is brittle. Oppression is the mask of fear. Remember that." -Karis Nemik

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Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:39 pm
omer says... · Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:39 pm
Oh, yes, I was refering to you, just got confused because I sent Vil a message, too. Sorry about that!! :)
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Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:31 pm
Soccer23 says... · Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:31 pm
Hi!
If you could review this, that would be awesome!
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Ljungtroll
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Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:52 pm
Ljungtroll says... · Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:52 pm
@Soccer23 I've posted the review :)
"The Imperial need for control is so desperate because it is so unnatural. Tyranny requires constant effort. It breaks, it leaks. Authority is brittle. Oppression is the mask of fear. Remember that." -Karis Nemik

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Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:12 pm
Dest says... · Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:12 pm
Hello! I'm looking for some feedback on a short story I'm working on. Could you take a look?
Yolk's on Me (1)

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