Haley's Honest Reviews

Hello everyone,

I review works, but I think that's pretty clear.

My rules~
-I will review fantasy, comedy, adventure, and science things. I will review short stories, chapters, poems, and articles.
-I won't review anything that is too triggering and i trust you to decide what that is based on how you know your work. I won't review lyrics or anything music related.
-Ask about anything you're unsure of.

Just pass me a link and I'll get to it within 3 days. If I don't get to it before then, just remind me. I'll let you know if my plans change.

My reviews can change from grammar to bigger picture, so let me know if you want something specific. I will try to aim to get some criticism in there no matter what because that is, in my opinion, needed for a good review.

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I hope to see some works soon.

hello, I would love for you to review my short story called the Land of Magic

Genre:
Fantasy and adventure/action

Estimated time:
45 min

Description:
A young girl named Ari has her home torn apart by the kingdom she lives in. fulled by the hatred the crown prince exacts his revenge.

Word count: 11734 words approximately in this short story.

16+ please as it may contain some language.

Thank you for reviewing and have a wonderful time reading.

Hey there, JesseWrites! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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