Lets do this NaPo thing. Only last month I didn't have the faintest idea that Poetry is the most beautiful way to express emotions. Its dreamy, its nostalgic, its thoughtful, its just simply beautiful. I am actually grateful to my exams who introduced me to poetry(EsCaPades). I am an amateur willing to learnThats a bold assumption Awru Also I thought it will be fun to have a themenot like I have the audacity to follow it asdfghjkl. So I decided on Rain. Why you ask cuz I like rain. Its fun and pretty and dreamy. The theme has to be*coughcough* flexible so I think I will also add other aspects of weather like sun, wind thats all I can think of right now ecetra
Even After All this time The Sun never says To the Earth "You owe me" Look What happens With a Love like that It lights the Whole Sky
Thanks @Liberty <33 This is going to my first NaPo poem Whooppp! I decided to get fancyy. The attachment is blur. So click on it if anyone wants to read it.
NaPo Poem: 1
"Drowning In the Rain"
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Even After All this time The Sun never says To the Earth "You owe me" Look What happens With a Love like that It lights the Whole Sky
Ooh, I love your poems are fantastic! I especially like the first one. You use very interesting words that knit together very well. And the little pictures in the corner add a nice touch to your poems. Keep it up! I'll be keeping up with your thread.
Aww! Thanks @Liberty So I ended up writing the 2nd part of the above poem. It just had this incomplete feeling to it. I felt like I just haavvee to give the whole story! Also I was feeling kinda romantic and sadistic. I hate myself
NaPo Poem: 3
"Its Raining Again" 2
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Even After All this time The Sun never says To the Earth "You owe me" Look What happens With a Love like that It lights the Whole Sky
Awru, that last poem has really fascinating formatting, from the punctuation to the alignment - I like seeing the more experimental side to your poetry! (Your author note about the last one not being very "poemy" made me laugh -> that's exactly the type of poem I like to read!!) Also I really dig the visuals you're choosing to compliment your poems. Well done!
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
Now I realize that there is no righteous path, it’s just people trying to do their best in a world where it is far too easy to do your worst. — Castiel
