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Hey, I'm Tawsif. I'd love to review your works.

Well, I'll particularly review novels, short stories, essays. I'm not a big fan of fantasy, historical, and fan-fiction items. But I'll try and see what I can do once you make your request.

I can say one thing for sure. I'll try my very level best to be a honest and thorough, as well as compassionate reviewer.

So, give me your precious writings!

Also, don't forget to give a few details (and of course the URL) of your writing.




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Hi Tawsif! I'd love a review of my work https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Vita/Corrupted-Courage-Chapter-7-147706
you've already reviewed other chapters of my novel, so you already know what it's about. I'd love to know what you think of my latest chapter. If you have the time, I'd really appreciate it!
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Finally, someone posts a request! Phew!

I'll get to it prettttty soon.




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Hello, hello! I feel rather ashamed asking for a review, but that's the whole point of this place, isn't it?

Anyways, would you mind reviewing my main story, Sunshine Fog? I'll add a link to the first chapter, it always bothers me when people don't start with the first one, to be honest with you.

The plot is basically the main character Warren dealing with his trauma from the war. And a key detail, it's two years after World War two except the Allies didn't win so eventually I'll be discussing a lot of political issues and such and I aim to make it as accurate as I can to the time period when it comes to post-war and flashbacks to the war and such/ (I have many personal books about WWII, so no worries there!)

Thank you, again! Feel free to ask me to review something for you if you want. : )

Here's the link - Chapter 1 - I'm Thinking




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Thanks for posting the request, Cow. And don't be ashamed now. You said it yourself: being not ashamed of posting a request is the whole point of this.

I hesitate to review your novel because I have very, very limited knowledge about World Wars (or any historical things for that matter :D ). So you can't expect any deep analysis of the historical information and stuff like that. I can just review your novel in general, if that's ok with you.

Please tell me if it's ok if I don't offer any remarks about the accuracy of historic facts about the war.




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HI @Tawsif

Hey could you take a look at the first chapter of my novel?

The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 1.1

Thanks in advance
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Hey @HarryHardy!

Thank you so much for reaching out to me. I'd love to help, but you see, currently I have this online exam going on. I'll try to get back to your piece as soon as possible. Please don't mind, and just be patient.

I'm extremely sorry!




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Oh...it's okay. I can wait.
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Hi @Tawsif!
I was hoping you could review chapters 8 and 9 of my novel corrupted courage. You've been reviewing my chapters since i started it, so I'd really value a review from you.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Vita/Corrupted-Courage-Chapter-8-147941
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Vita/Corrupted-Courage-Chapter-9-148397
If you don't have time I totally understand!
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Hello there! I am canopy, a Res & Comm crew mod, and I am locking and moving your thread to the WRFF Archive as your thread has not been active in a very long time. We do this to keep our forums up to date. Should you ever want to reopen your thread please feel free to reach out any Res & Comm crew mod and we'll happy to help you out!

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