Will Review Short Stories and Poetry

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What I Will Review
I will review short stories, poetry, and on occasion, a novel, but only the prologue or first chapter.

What I won't Review
I will not review 16+ or above.
I won't review your novel unless it is chapter one, or you request more reviews for the next few chapters.

The review may vary in leagth. My reviews tend to be shorter than others, but I do like analyzing some peices that I really get into.
I tend to focus on the flow, plot, etc, but I do sometimes to point out grammar or spelling mistakes.

Please leave a link to your work, the title, the genre, and a short summary.
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Hi, can you review my short story, A Heavenly Song? I'm bad at determining genres but it might fall somewhere between suspense and very mild horror? As for a summary, it's about a man named Connor who wakes up on his ship and finds his crew missing with no real idea why, eventually discovering a siren off the side of his boat.




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Alrighty! I'll get to it sometime today or tomorrow!
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Can you review How I found the house please.
Last edited by Horselover1001 on Thu Oct 17, 2019 4:16 am, edited 1 time in total.




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@horselover sure thing! Can you create a link to it?
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I made a link, and I just published another WAY longer story that I was wondering if you could review as well, it's called The Rise and Fall of Casey Woodland. It's not quite finnished but it's getting there
Last edited by Horselover1001 on Sat Sep 05, 2020 9:52 am, edited 1 time in total.




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The rise and fall of Casey Woodland
How I found the house.
You may not want to review The Rise and Fall of Casey Woodland, it's quite long.




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I'll check it out! I'm sorry I didn't get to reviewing it last time... Something came up, and I sort of forgot about this thread
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