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Review this chapter one please!
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Works for me to review:
swetachowdhury0 : change of hearts 1 and 2
Sree: SHE
TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanfic parts 3-6
zaminami- ana
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@nrrc102 I’m away for a week, but will do ASAP!
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If could please critique this short story of mine. Thank you!

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The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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@Fishr sure!
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Thanks!
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.




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New list:

TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanficpart 4
Fishr: No Name
Saen: The Three Lockets 1.1
TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanfic part 5
Sree: SHE
Saen: The Three Lockets 1.2
TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanfic part 6
swetachowdhury0: change of hearts part 2
Saen: The Three Lockets 2.1
TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanfic part 7
TheBlueCat: Blue Arrows Ch. 1: Different
Saen: The Three Lockets 2.2
TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanfic part 8
EagleFly: Eagle Times Book One Enemy Of Death
Saen: The Three Lockets 3.1
TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanfic part 9
Saen: The Three Lockets 3.2
TheBlueCat: Blue Arrows Ch.2: Fire!
Saen: The Three Lockets 3.3
TheWeirdoFromBeyond: Percy Jackson fanfic part 10
Saen: The Three Lockets 3.4
EagleFly: Eagle Times Book One Enemy of Death Chapter One Years Later
Saen: The Three Lockets 4.1
Saen: The Three Lockets 4.2
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

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Hey there, Danni88! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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