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I can't promise to respond quickly, but I'll do my best.

I don't feel qualified to review poetry, so please don't request it. I also won't review anything rated 18+.

I feel best qualified to review sic-fi, fantasy, and action/adventure books and short stories, but I will review anything that I didn't just say I wouldn't. That includes *shudders* romance. I don't enjoy romance, but if you really want me to, I'll review it.

I also won't read the previous chapters to a chapter that has been requested, just the requested chapter.

To sum it up, I won't review:
Poetry
18+ rating

I will review, but don't want to:
Essay
Romance *shudders*

I want to review:
Action/Adventure
Sci-Fi
Fantasy

I will review with no particular feelings:
Everything else

Let the reviews begin!
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Hey! So I have 3 stories on here but 2 of them are romance so I won't request those :P I am going to request my most recent story, it's the first chapter, not very long. It doesn't give much but it is sci-fi and futuristic. I hope you like it. Take your time and you don't have to review my work :smt001 Thank you!

Here is the link:
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Done!
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I'm going to take you up on this for Knowing Gods. It's a fantasy which has multiple worlds. It's the first two chapters, I hope that's okay, they're not big. I'm linking these because there are too many drafts.

Knowing Gods chapter 1 (Third draft) This one is going through editing but what I have doesn't currently make sense so I'm just going to say what they are. This chapter has become chapter 3, chapter 1 now being about the antagonist, the flashback has been removed as well as the small fight scene.

Knowing Gods Chapter 2 (Third draft) This one is under really heavy editing but I kind of just want a second opinion on the most recent draft.

Thank you ^_^
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Could I get some reviews on my fantasy novel, Huntress? It has a bit of language and violence, but nothing super intense or gory.

create.php?id=134209

That's the link to the first out of three chapters.
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@featherstone9086, could you send the link again? I clicked on it and YWS said "I'm afarid I can't let you do that, Dave."
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Huntress: Chapter 1- Pack [Edited; LMS]

Here it is! Sorry about that. Also, btw, I don't need reviews on Chapter 1/2 that don't say [Edited] on the end of them ^_^ Thanks!
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@featherstone9086 Sorry this is taking so long. I'm on vacation, so I haven't been reviewing much.
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No problem. I'm patient :)
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Hi. I need an honest review for my article. Here's the link

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Aaraju/An-Unfulfilled-Dream-135138

Thank you very much.




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Hey there, Feltrix! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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