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"If I had nine hours to chop down a tree, I'd spend the first six sharpening my ax." -Abraham Lincoln

Hello, fellow YWSers!

As my mission here is to boost the development of your writing skills over the course of the next year, I am eagerly accepting requests for reviews. There are only two things you need to do:

• Post a link to your literary work in this thread.

• Tell me what you would like to me too take a look at (e.g. character development, grammar mistakes, plot progression, structure, style, etcetra).

Lastly, I can not promise to meet your requests immediately. However, I will try my best to be as prompt as possible.

Thank you! :)




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Follow The Shining Stars I would it if you could check my paragraphing, please.
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
-Demetri Martin




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Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Other Side I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is tomorrow so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx




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Hello! Please review my work. I guess I need you to comment on my writing style and give me tips on how to make my work better. I would really appreciate your help. Thank you. :)

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Hey there, 2017! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!



Stories don't end because you stopped paying attention.
— SJ Whitby