Trying to Earn My Next Review Star!

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Hi there. I'm new to the YWS and I haven't had much reviews yet . I would so much appreciate it if you would review my first story
The Epping Forest

I need as much criticism as possible on my first work before I post my second.

Thank you very much for your time and advice :D




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Hi I would really like reviews for my realistic short story The Recovery I am writing it for a short story competition of which the deadline is today so if it can be done asap that would be really helpful thanks xx




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Hello! Please review my work. This creative non-fiction and I'm hoping to pass it on our school's creative writing workshop. Thank you so much. :D

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Hey there, InfiniteRectangles! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!



so many languages have fallen / off of the edge of the world / into the dragon's mouth.
— Lucille Clifton