Star Wars: Rise of the Legion DT

LordZeus wrote:@Allisonthewriter just informing you that I will post as soon as possible. I actually had my post written up but then lost it due to a wifi issue
I'll rewrite it as soon as I can. Thank you for your patience!

Thanks! Aw, I hate when that happens.... I think sometimes the YWS composer autosaves text to a certain point. If you start a new reply, but click the "Load" button next to "Save," "Preview," and "Submit," you might be able to bring back some of your progress.... Either way, take your time.

So I made a lot of changes to Ryan if anyone wants to go check that out. Feel free to include his aunt on anything you want. I want her around for a couple more posts of mine, but eventually anyone from the Legion can have at her ending in a dramatic and exciting epic duel, followed by a dramatic death with the revelation her apprentice is actually Darth Maxus, son of Darth Martonius and he's on a path to bring down the Legion. Boom Shaka locka. Thank you all.

TheForgottenKing wrote:So I made a lot of changes to Ryan if anyone wants to go check that out. Feel free to include his aunt on anything you want. I want her around for a couple more posts of mine, but eventually anyone from the Legion can have at her ending in a dramatic and exciting epic duel, followed by a dramatic death with the revelation her apprentice is actually Darth Maxus, son of Darth Martonisu. Boom Shaka locka. Thank you all.

WOW! I really enjoyed your post - very action-packed! Any chance the Legion might hire or blackmail Ryan's team into tracking down Ro? Eventually, she's going to have a big, accidental display of her Force powers, and there's a certain Sith (or two, depending on @TheFantasy14's availability at that time) who wants her back.

I hope it's alright with you, I did kind of reference Ryan's character pre-changes in a few posts, but it wasn't anything that overly conflicts. Let me know if you'd like me to go back and update things.

@Allisonthewriter once again sorry for the wait, but as I said I lost my post. But i have begun rewriting it an it will be up within the next 12 hrs. I hope thats not too late!

@LordZeus - No worries. Take your time!

@Allisonthewriter I posted! Erik's plan worked and they got the cat

That was GENIUS! I'll start working on the continuation tomorrow.

@TheForgottenKing I'm very interested in what you said to me in your message. I had written up a rather a rather long reply then lost it due to to wifi issues...I know, it seems to be acting up on me more often these days
Whenever I get the time, I will rewrite it and send it to you. Please don't post until I send you the message please, as it will concern it greatly. Thank you!

Any pilots willing to interact with Dayo, I don't want to post without having another writer involved with my charrie

@LordZeus, I just posted, and Ro's just started a conversation with Erik.
@Kelpies, Ebony is now coming off the tranquilizers in the Jade Star's cargo hold. She's safe, and Ro will be interacting with her in my next post!

@LordZeus

Sounds good

@Allisonthewriter I posted the conversation. Please let me know if I made Ro seem too emotional, but I wanted there to be an opportunity to start developing
the brother/sister relationship. By the way, I remember us talking earlier about Grin recruiting Erik to his ship, but I don't recall if we reached a plan about that. In any case, I left it open. Grin could be talking to Erik about that, or anything else.

@LordZeus - You did great! Just the right amount of emotion going on there. One small quibble: I don't know if Ro is in the habit of saying "kriff," but she is pretty distressed right now, so I'm not worried. (In general, I'm pretty liberal about using Star Wars "language.")

If Erik can leave without upsetting his folks, Grin and Ro would love if he could join the crew.

@LordZeus - I just wrote a quick scene between Grin and Erik. The way I've set it up, they're going to speak to Mr. Stone about Erik joining Grin's crew. If you need anything changed, let me know.

@AllisontheWriter , posted! Erik's joining Grin aboard the Jade Star ! Oh, and allison please refrain from posting until @TheForgottenKing posts, as we have something planned before Erik actually joins Grin's ship. King, please post as soon as you can.