Yeah, I've been having trouble with the code. I copied and pasted it and tried to put it up, but it just came up with the code and didn't upload the image. I have no Idea what's doing on. I'll try again with this one. Maybe it'll work better.
@Chaser is it ok if Neon has a dog? I want the dog to break out of the house and run across the street to Gwen's house while Gwen is just about to leave and I want her to freak out while Neon scrambles to grab the dog and bring him/her back inside.
Very nice post, Hazel. I'll work on mine tomorrow!
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
@LeftyWriter, The chips sound like a good Idea. It would fit in with the whole Soldier Riley bit. When they're found again they could re-activate the tracking thing in all of them somehow, and update Riley's chip with a control app or something (For obvious reasons) as well as a homing signal that allows SR to close in and lock on a target.
As for the chair, I like option one. It seems the best way to run tests quickly and without them noticing.
Posted! Let me know if I need to change anything, particularly about Cole at the end there.
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
*feels conflicted because he wrote the scene where Neon finds them but it's too early for the character development there and it's probably best to keep the suits low-key for now*
The hardest part of writing science fiction is knowing actual science. The same applies for me and realistic fiction.
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
Okay! For Michael's part, it'll be up sometime tomorrow or Tuesday.
You are like a blacksmith's hammer, you always forge people's happiness until the coal heating up the forge turns to ash. Then you just refuel it and start over. -Persistence (2015)
You have so much potential and love bursting in you. -Omnom
Do you guys think we should move on from the field trip now, unless a character had a particularly interesting encounter in the lab? Like, if they are all experiencing the same emotions and stuff, is it worth repeating for each perspective?
"This world is but a canvas to our imagination." ~Thoreau
